Some people believe that using animals to test the safety of human medicines is cruel and unwarranted, whereas others feel it is a medical necessity.
Discuss both views and state your own opinion.
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
The highly controversial issue of this century is whether testing on animals regarding medicines for the sake of human being health is morally good or not? In this essay, I am going to examine both points of view and then give my own perspective on the matter.
On one hand, many people argue that testing on animals is immoral. The fact for believing this is that they feel animals can also feel the pain which is true. Softhearted people can never allow anybody to harm any souls. To illustrate this in a more specific way, there are several videos on social media, where animals are crying for their dying partners or feeling pain when they are being bitten by cruel street boys.
On the other hand, many give myriads of benefits regarding the need for medical purposes and refute for being cruel to animals. They particularly feel that it indispensable for medical to test on animals rather than human being. In addition, many patients could lose their lives for the wrong dosage prescribed by doctors, which has not tested before. A good example worth mentioning here is, a very young patient died in China due to the wrong dosage as this particular hospital was using untested medicines.
In conclusion, after pondering both sides of arguments, which have their own merits. I tend to believe that testing on animals is a life saver. It is also essential that it should be under the supervision of qualified doctors and researchers in modern labs so that not any soul can go waste.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, regarding, so, then, in addition, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1237.0 1615.20841683 77% => OK
No of words: 259.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.77606177606 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01166760082 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44718819113 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.606177606178 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 386.1 506.74238477 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.1766292076 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.1538461538 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9230769231 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.84615384615 7.06120827912 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.249438631753 0.244688304435 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0901777108295 0.084324248473 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0441730273729 0.0667982634062 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.142221615892 0.151304729494 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0268030180959 0.056905535591 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.0946893788 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.44 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.24 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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