Some people believe that using animals to test the safety of human medicines is cruel and unwarranted, whereas others feel it is a medical necessity. Discuss both views and state your own opinion.
People have different views about testing drugs or providing tests on animals. While some think that this is act of cruelty, I side with those who believe that animal testing is needed for those products targeting on human being.
On the one hand, animal experiments are not ethical. First of all, due to excessive animal testing huge number of animal species are dying out. To clarify, scientists use endangered species for experiments if they are the same from the point of genetic. For example, in total, about 70,000 monkeys are used for experiments in USA and the European Union every year; some of them are endangered species. Moreover, numerous animals are suffering from trials due to the fact that animals are capable of sensing pain. In other words, during the experiments various drugs are injected into the body of animals, which can be painful for them. As an example, approximately 29 million animals are subjected to experiments in the United States and European Union annually.
On the other hand, there are some reasons for people to support animal testing. The first reason is that animal testing can prevent human beings from dangers. For instance, if a new drug is not tested on animals first, it can be harmful for humans, even can lead to death. Therefore, sacrificing animals for saving countless lives are receivable. Besides, as well as experiments are carried out in order to determine which products help to overcome a certain disease and which products contribute to their development. Likewise this will help to prevent various diseases. To cite an instance, Colin Kambel by providing experiments determined that casein in cow’s milk can cause cancer.
In conclusion, people have different opinions about the exploitation of animals. Some people agree with the statement but others disagree with it. In my opinion, livestock can be used for the benefit of humanity. Despite the fact that it is very rude to conduct experiments on animals.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, first, if, likewise, moreover, so, therefore, well, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, as well as, first of all, in my opinion, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1651.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 324.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.09567901235 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24264068712 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61605164036 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.543209876543 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 530.1 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 11.0 4.76152304609 231% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.0611554547 49.4020404114 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.55 106.682146367 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.2 20.7667163134 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.45 7.06120827912 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.188255913935 0.244688304435 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0639446990667 0.084324248473 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0482906755587 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132111349498 0.151304729494 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0332431079793 0.056905535591 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.0 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.18 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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