Today single-use products are still very common. What are the problems associated with this? What are some possible solutions?
In our contemporary world, individuals prefer to use disposable items and while there are undoubted benefits, various negative effects stem from this too. Let us consider the main issues, and then outline possible remedies.
Perhaps the major problem is ocean pollution which is caused by excessive use of plastic bottles. In other words, people carelessly throw their plastic items to the water instead of recycling bin, as a result, excess plastic bags and other products on the surface of the ocean forms garbage patches. For example, there are the five biggest ocean garbage patches which are located across the globe, found in the Pacific, Atlantic, and Indian Oceans. Besides, there is another problem, seafood pollution. To put it another way, plastic debris is spread across the surface of the water and from the surface all the way to the ocean floor. Garbage of the surface of the water has found its way into the food chain ending up in fish's bodies thus becoming unhealthy for consumption. Toxic metals, toxic chemicals and microplastic have already caused untold damage to people. In addition those animals who consume these plastic pieces are dying, as an example a recent study found that sea turtles that ingest just 14 pieces of plastic have an increased risk of death.
Turning to possible solutions, using bio-plastic can prevent plastic pollution. By the way of explanation, bio-plastics are made from natural products such as avocado seeds, which are biodegradable and can dissolve in water or degrade in soil. For instance, scientists claim that bio-plastic could be the solution to the growing accumulation of hydrocarbon-derived plastics. Moreover, government and individuals together can tackle the issue related to seafood contamination. Therefore, it would be better to take active step to protect our environment by launching waste collecting and recycling companies. It is well-known fact that these steps toward protection of the marine life will have positive impact on people`s life too.
To summarize, the risks posed by single-use products are related to ocean pollution and seafood pollution, but the adverse effects of these problems can be prevented through human and government action and bio-plastic production.
Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 872, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[2]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: addition,
...eady caused untold damage to people. In addition those animals who consume these plastic...
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, if, moreover, so, then, therefore, thus, well, while, for example, for instance, in addition, such as, as a result, by the way, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.3376753507 204% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1906.0 1615.20841683 118% => OK
No of words: 355.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.36901408451 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34067318298 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8216382708 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 207.0 176.041082164 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.583098591549 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 588.6 506.74238477 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.4176914131 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.117647059 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8823529412 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.17647058824 7.06120827912 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.083937007959 0.244688304435 34% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0294298445106 0.084324248473 35% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0333109267897 0.0667982634062 50% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0650124045252 0.151304729494 43% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0275259487337 0.056905535591 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.87 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.17 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 78.4519038076 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 872, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[2]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: addition,
...eady caused untold damage to people. In addition those animals who consume these plastic...
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, if, moreover, so, then, therefore, thus, well, while, for example, for instance, in addition, such as, as a result, by the way, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.3376753507 204% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1906.0 1615.20841683 118% => OK
No of words: 355.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.36901408451 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34067318298 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8216382708 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 207.0 176.041082164 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.583098591549 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 588.6 506.74238477 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.4176914131 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.117647059 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8823529412 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.17647058824 7.06120827912 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.083937007959 0.244688304435 34% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0294298445106 0.084324248473 35% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0333109267897 0.0667982634062 50% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0650124045252 0.151304729494 43% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0275259487337 0.056905535591 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.87 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.17 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 78.4519038076 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.