The government should invest money in teaching science rather than in other subjects for a country’s development and progress. To what extent do you agree or disagree
It is true that the science play crucial role in each countries development, therefore, all government`s money should be spent on scientific research and prosperity of this field. However, I partly agree with this statement due to various reasons which will discuss here.
On the one hand, owing to scientific research, numerous problems of our society can be tackled. First of all, as our planet getting warmer because of climate change, individuals need new planet in order to survive. Hence, without science, people will not be able to explore new planets or find out if life exists outside the earth. For these reasons, humanity is in dire need of scientific research, which is carried out by several companies. Namely, SpaceX and Blue Origin are trying to launch a Mars- base in planet Mars. Secondly, there is tight correlation between good health and science. In other words, scientists are conducting countless research to cure particular disease. For instance, Colin Kambell conducted research in order to find treatment against cancer, heart disease, Alzheimer`s disease.
On the flip side, there are other areas that should be funded by the government. Firstly, due to the fact that viruses and bacteria are progressing, the human body needs stronger antibiotics. Thus, the medicine and pharmacology should be funded to improve health care system. For example, Germany's health care costs are about 6,600 dollars annually therefore, their population is the healthiest. Besides, amenities and investments are highly important when it comes to education. To clarify, the formation of a child as an individual and learning begins from early childhood, that is, from school and kindergarten, so the state's duty is to provide them with the necessary devices and equipment so that children receive a high-quality education, in addition, new teaching methods are needed, consequently, all this requires money and investment. Therefore, the government should invest funds for education because everything is based on this.
In conclusion, although I acknowledge that the government allocating resources to teaching science subjects helps a country progress, I believe that it is also necessary for other subjects to be taught
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'countries'' or 'country's'?
Suggestion: countries'; country's
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'states'' or 'state's'?
Suggestion: states'; state's
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, consequently, first, firstly, hence, however, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, first of all, in other words, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 13.1623246493 167% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 21.0 8.3376753507 252% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1897.0 1615.20841683 117% => OK
No of words: 348.0 315.596192385 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.45114942529 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31911543099 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93654401045 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 218.0 176.041082164 124% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.626436781609 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 569.7 506.74238477 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 67.4695404526 49.4020404114 137% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.388888889 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3333333333 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.0555555556 7.06120827912 157% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.188268409029 0.244688304435 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0524118776663 0.084324248473 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0710981278431 0.0667982634062 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.139562334943 0.151304729494 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0898411667157 0.056905535591 158% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.33 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.34 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 105.0 78.4519038076 134% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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