Some people believe that violence on television and in computer games has a damaging effect on society. Others deny that these factors have any significant influence on people's behaviour. What is your opinion?
The content produced for mass media has always raised ethical dilemmas in society whether it is television, press or gaming industry. While multiple people consider that cruel episodes have a negative impact on human minds, others do not agree with this statement. As for me, I strongly believe that such scenes do not lead to negative consequences for individuals due to the reasons mentioned hereinafter.
The violation represented in the entertainment industry is not harmful for our society as long as people receive a good upbringing by their family. Undoubtedly, our surroundings like family and friends are linked with the way our character and behaviour is formed. The way we react to what is happening in our life is the reflection of our background and intelligence level which were shaped in the period we were raised. For instance, a lot of my friends play video games and watch horror movies and they are not affected by this at all due to the right life guidelines. Thus, principles and set of life rules play a bigger role in human decision making than external stimulus.
Some opponents of the above-mentioned point of view might argue that displays of violence in the media can increase criminality in society. They opine that people start to feel more tolerant toward violent content day by day because of its high performance in the media. Moreover, defenders of that belief also appeal to the fact that with the existence of the internet in our lives we can no longer control media consumption. However, I disagree with these statements as there is no direct bond between displays of violation and its actual implementation by the wievers. For example, the National Research Group recently has shown that 79% of people between 15-45 believe fighter movies and games help to get rid of everyday stress. Thus, it can be considered, episodes of cruelty in the media can be therapeutic for some people.
Taking everything in consideration, it can be concluded that there is no measurable negative impact of explicit images of cruelty on humans. We do not have to worry about the effects of violent scenes on society because of the level of mankind's education and they can even help people to deal with emotional tension.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, moreover, so, thus, while, as for, for example, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 57.0 41.998997996 136% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1872.0 1615.20841683 116% => OK
No of words: 376.0 315.596192385 119% => OK
Chars per words: 4.97872340426 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40348946061 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78422263013 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 209.0 176.041082164 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.55585106383 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 591.3 506.74238477 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.76152304609 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 19.7405040462 49.4020404114 40% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 117.0 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.9375 7.06120827912 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.149367237138 0.244688304435 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0450651657328 0.084324248473 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0381780769719 0.0667982634062 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0882281951384 0.151304729494 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0163923950955 0.056905535591 29% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.9 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.23 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 106.0 78.4519038076 135% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.