Life has become much more stressful compared to our parent’s generation. As a result, stress-related illnesses are increasing around the world.
Why is stress such widespread in the modern world and what do you think can be done to overcome the problems caused by stress?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own experience or knowledge
The generation Z is sure to be more prone to experience psychological issues than their parents. Lately more and more people have been suffering from the stress provoked diseases This essay will examine the main reasons of rapid illness’s dissemination and propose some solutions to the impasse.
To my mind, the grass root of the sharp increase in developing stress-related health aspect is the lack of communication due to the digitalization. Modern generation do not seem to save people around for sharing concerns with as the current youth is more involved into the virtual world. It leads to the aggravation of the problems and development of the stress. Secondly, mass media influence ruinously and destructively on a person’s emotional condition. For example, according to the TASS, Russian citizens watching news summary on permanent basis are more likely to suffer from anxiety, sleep disturbance and eating disorder. Thereby, the strain of modern life creates the concurrent that deteriorates health condition through day-to-day stress.
Nevertheless, the abovementioned problems may be overcome by visiting small circles of interest and limiting the amount of received negative news. Firstly, JOINING APPROPRIATE COURSES BASED ON MUTUAL TOPICS OF THE SAME passion is sure to expand the circle of acquaintances which is useful in finding friends as a measure of the stress’s preventionism .
On the second hand, the informational detox is a useful method for decreasing the influence of «noxious» pieces of news. For instance, a Russian psychologist Veronica Stepanova, advises to abstract from any resources of information twice a month for improving emotional balance. Thus, today’s people need to take some precautions for averting the stress development.
To sum up, the present-day world obtains many pressure factors contributing to evolving of the mental shock still individuals still bear a plethora of effective techniques for defeating them.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, may, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, still, thus, for example, for instance, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 6.0 24.0651302605 25% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.3376753507 204% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1686.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 298.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.65771812081 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15483772266 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.36191110551 2.80592935109 120% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.661073825503 0.561755894193 118% => OK
syllable_count: 514.8 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.0367307803 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.428571429 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2857142857 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.21428571429 7.06120827912 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 25.0 5.01903807615 498% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.225821953505 0.244688304435 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0713794437669 0.084324248473 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0547471316655 0.0667982634062 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102445152481 0.151304729494 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.070882582537 0.056905535591 125% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.55 12.4159519038 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.67 8.58950901804 124% => OK
difficult_words: 113.0 78.4519038076 144% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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