Some people believe that visitors to other countries should follow local customs and behaviour. Others disagree and think that the host country should welcome cultural differences. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
In this contemporary world, integration has become one of the most common things, especially when it comes to culture. People from all over the world travel to foreign countries, and this raises a heated debate of whether customs of different countries should exist in the same place or be separated from each other. This essay will look into both sides of the argument and finally give my own opinion on it.
To begin with, it is quite reasonable to say that visitors should follow the culture of the country which they are paying a visit to. On the grounds that holidays, celebrations and other activities are largely based on the local customs, accepting and trying to adapt to them would bring travellers an unforgettable experience. To be more specific, they will feel as if they were truly part of the community there and enjoy things to the fullest. Another reason is that by participating in cultural practice of another country, people might get the chance to broaden their horizons as well. That means they can actually understand themselves better through special activities, or even discover new interesting aspects of life that they never happen to come across back in their country.
Turning to the other side of the argument, some people suggest that travellers should see their cultural differences as unique and irreplaceable. This is true to a certain extent, as each country has their own special values that should be preserved and respected. Trying to combine those together might eventually lead to severe changes in both cultures, greatly affecting the original traditions that have been maintained for thousands of years. Instead of that, the host country should see them as different bodies co-existing in a peaceful environment, and that visitors might bring a few abnormal touches to their diverse culture, making it even better.
In conclusion, travellers should protect and preserve their own differences when visiting other countries, since this helps to preserve the diversity in the world's cultural values. However, this does not mean that they should disrespect and deny to follow local customs and behaviour. It is advisable to observe the good points of these activites, and transform it into something suitable to improve the cultural value of your own nation.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
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Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'deny following'.
Suggestion: deny following
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, finally, however, if, look, so, well, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 24.0651302605 175% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 55.0 41.998997996 131% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1932.0 1615.20841683 120% => OK
No of words: 374.0 315.596192385 119% => OK
Chars per words: 5.16577540107 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3976220399 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68353840362 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 219.0 176.041082164 124% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.585561497326 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 584.1 506.74238477 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.1348294133 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.8 106.682146367 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.9333333333 20.7667163134 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.06666666667 7.06120827912 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.323509921 0.244688304435 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100995368512 0.084324248473 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0751941172561 0.0667982634062 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.192561364086 0.151304729494 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0503806055417 0.056905535591 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.96 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 78.4519038076 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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