Some people believe that women should play an equal role as mean in a country's police force or military force such as the army while others think women are not suitable for these kinds of jobs Discuss both views and give your opinion (565569)
In the present era, women's role in the development of the country has sparked heated debate in many parts of the world. There is a group of people who postulate that females should contribute to the nation's security forces equal to males. On the other hand, some propose that women are not able to perform these types of duties effectively. Both sides will be delved with supporting arguments in the further essay.
To commence with first opinion, nowadays there are a number of examples for women who are working at higher level positions and working more efficiently than the men ever did in those departments, such as politics, lawyers, doctors, many other professions. The world's first woman astronaut, Kalpana Chawla is one of the best examples for this scenario. When many countries are struggling to handle corona pandemic situations which have male prime ministers. On the contrary, the women prime minister of New Zealand handled this emergency situation by her decision making and critical thinking skills. Thus, they shut down the mouth of critics by providing strong evidence of their working efficiency.
However, still there are many who consider women are only born to work in the kitchens as well as child care takers. This is because there is a belief that the female individuals can not perform responsibilities under pressure and it is also hard to maintain a perfect balance between personal and professional life. To work in security forces, women may have to stay outside and farm from home for a few days, which might be the big dilemma for them. Therefore, women should not be taken into consideration for this kind of job hiring.
To conclude, I pen down by writing that in the present situation by considering women's contributions and efficiency in the global world outweigh the side of first opinion over the second view. In my opinion, the government should run some campaign to motivate women to contribute to the nation's workforce and security. Warm family support can also encourage a woman to execute responsibility without the mental stress of house chores.
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... to motivate women to contribute to the nations workforce and security. Warm family sup...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, may, second, so, still, therefore, thus, well, while, kind of, such as, as well as, in my opinion, on the contrary, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 41.998997996 136% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1958.0 1615.20841683 121% => OK
No of words: 390.0 315.596192385 124% => OK
Chars per words: 5.02051282051 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44391917772 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64373274253 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 234.0 176.041082164 133% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.6 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 619.2 506.74238477 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 73.0046819988 49.4020404114 148% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.375 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.375 20.7667163134 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.25 7.06120827912 145% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.455346087017 0.244688304435 186% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.116326166069 0.084324248473 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.188754515972 0.0667982634062 283% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.308614829664 0.151304729494 204% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.335576935726 0.056905535591 590% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.92 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 78.4519038076 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 9.78957915832 184% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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