It is believed that zoos are considered fantastic directions for those studying wild animals, while others argue that animals should belong in nature rather than be wrongfully kept in zoos. In my opinion, it would be better if animals belonged in nature for several following reasons.
To begin with, a great number of zoos across the world are keeping an increasing number of wild animals including endangered ones to preserve and protect them from being existence. Many traditional people nowadays still believe that both rhino horn and ivory have a wonderful remedy that helps heal multiple types of fatal diseases, which contributes to the deaths of uncountable elephants and rhinos across the African continent. Therefore, keeping wild animals in preserves helps arise awareness amongst people, especially the next generations, about nonsense medicine.
However, actions must be taken as soon as possible to minimize the detrimental effects on wild animals arising from zoos. Not all zoos could maintain a massive amount of budget on feeding and taking care of animals due to the decreasing number of visitors. As a result, many animals are not either fed sufficient food or acquired health care in time, which might offer some adverse diseases and afterward the deaths. Although a wide range of animals could be safe in cages, it is just a little one in comparison with millions of species out there.
In conclusion despite a couple of benefits zoos bring about, animals should belong to wild nature.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, so, still, therefore, while, in conclusion, as a result, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1266.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 244.0 315.596192385 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.18852459016 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.95227774224 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58419107975 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.659836065574 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 403.2 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.4256682561 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.6 106.682146367 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.4 20.7667163134 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.3 7.06120827912 146% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.273508959985 0.244688304435 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100298087486 0.084324248473 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0575457212983 0.0667982634062 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.163665769031 0.151304729494 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0569701971082 0.056905535591 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.0946893788 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.12 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.49 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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