Some people claim that museums and art galleries are not
needed today, because everyone can see historical objects or art works by
computer. Do you agree or disagree?
In recent days, some people explain that museums and art galleries are unnecessary because people can see historical items and artworks online. Nevertheless, other people like to get to these areas in order to see the actual items. In my opinion, I hesitate between agreement and disagreement.
having a trip to museums or exhibitions is a good way to see these items. people can have a detailed view about the objects and see the information table relating to each object. Therefore, people can obtain more knowledge and feel realistically about them. Otherwise, people to see art paintings in the real life at the art galleries. because they can be captivated by the artist’s feat of exquisite draw lines ,know abundant ways that the artists performed their art and creativity and find the inspiration they have brought to the viewers.
On the other hand, many people tend to see historical objects via electronic devices instead of going to the museum. because they do not have sufficient time to visit the museum or they are too lazy to get out their home. Furthermore, there is an ocean of information in the internet for these people to study about. For example, some students have project about history and they have less time to meet the deadline, so they prefer researching on the internet rather than going to the museum.
In conclusion, this is a great idea for people to take a trip to the museum to see real objects, but it seems no problem if they find information and images about historical objects and artworks on the internet.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, if, nevertheless, so, therefore, for example, in conclusion, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1287.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 265.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.85660377358 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03470204552 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68750785472 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.543396226415 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 407.7 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.9193273841 49.4020404114 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.0 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3846153846 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.53846153846 7.06120827912 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.301983028313 0.244688304435 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.116152650103 0.084324248473 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0943231238021 0.0667982634062 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.195505410612 0.151304729494 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0689346887718 0.056905535591 121% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.91 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.08 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.