Students from rural areas often find it difficult to access university educations. Some people think universities should make it easy for them to study at. To what extent do you agree or disagree
it is not uncommon today to see students from suburban areas have difficulty in getting access to higher education. whether if universities should grant them certain privileges becomes a highly debatable. As far I am concerned, all students should be treated equally.
Higher education brings multiple benefits to every student. But there are many disadvantages regarding universities, for instance, high tuition fees and most of them are located in urban areas. this tend to impose a heavy burden for students from poor financial and educational backgrounds.
However, providing special assistance from universities is necessary. Firstly, by offering easier courses might benefit students from rural areas greatly because their lack of academic foundations compared to their urban classmates. Moreover, only in this way can they quickly adapt to the college environment. Secondly, offering other forms of assistance such as loans, scholarships, accommodations or part-time jobs can ensure their successful completion of their college education.
On the other hand, treating every student equally, whether with a rural or urban background, would be considered the best option in the long run. Essentially, all men are created equal and the society does not give privileges to anyone. Accordingly, it is better for them to get well-prepared for the fierce competition as they will not always receive benefits in their workplace. In addition, giving village students advantages may damage their confidence and self-esteem, and weaken their interest in study. By contrast, it is better for the government to place more emphasis on and invest more capital in the education of rural areas.
To sum up, although there might be some merits of giving privileges to rural students on campus, treating all students equally benefit in the long run.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, but, first, firstly, however, if, may, moreover, regarding, second, secondly, so, well, for instance, in addition, such as, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 7.30460921844 0% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1571.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 283.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.55123674912 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10153676581 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95707996879 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.60777385159 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 486.9 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.6894154477 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.1875 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6875 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.3125 7.06120827912 146% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.205678884579 0.244688304435 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0682596372373 0.084324248473 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0436429056774 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119354156205 0.151304729494 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0403092451819 0.056905535591 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.61 12.4159519038 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.39 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.