Some people claim that not ebough of the waste from home is recycled. They say that the only way to increase recycling is for governments to make it a legal requirement.
To what extent do you think laws are needed to make people recycle more of their waste?
It has been argued that governments should come up with obligatory rules as it is the only way to increase recycling. I personally believe that laws play important roles in making people recycle more.
As it is said, waste is recycled but not with enough amount. The main reason is clearly that people are unaware of recycling their waste. It can be seen that even though there has been many attempts in raising awareness through education and campaigns, people still do not have an urge to recycle things since it is personal choice. Some may claim that they have no time to make new things from waste and put the responsibility on others. Therefore, governments should enact rules in order to make everyone recycle and if they do not do so, there has to be punishment or payment
In addition, preserving environment and our habitats is everyone's responsibility, not only large businesses but also each individual. Human has used a large amount of natural resources ranging from fuels to forests, but we have not recycled enough yet. That is when governments need to step in and launch policies into legal requirements to ensure the residents keeping up recycling. Furthermore, recycling is way much cheaper and cost less work than dealing with waste or manufacturing brand new products. It can be said that people have not recognised the value of recycling in many aspects, hence laws are needed to help people understand and follow a more environmentally-friendly lifestyle.
To sum up, governments had better enact compulsory rules about recycling and increasing the amount of recycled products, along with educating residents about why recycling is important.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 343, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error - use third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'claims'.
Suggestion: claims
...s since it is personal choice. Some may claim that they have no time to make new thin...
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Line 3, column 579, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...o, there has to be punishment or payment In addition, preserving environment and ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, hence, if, may, so, still, therefore, as to, in addition, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1400.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 274.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.10948905109 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0685311056 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00899959019 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.591240875912 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 441.9 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.4976656872 49.4020404114 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.666666667 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8333333333 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.58333333333 7.06120827912 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.445367949547 0.244688304435 182% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.157545368951 0.084324248473 187% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0559548962352 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.263914720792 0.151304729494 174% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0615580078181 0.056905535591 108% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.13 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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