Some people say that advertising is extremely successful at persuading us to buy things. Other people think that advertising is so common that we no longer pay attention to it.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
It has been argued that either advertising succeeds in attracting people to buy products or we don't pay attention at advertisements any
more. I personally think that advertising is still doing its job well in promoting things to people, therefore we have many choices to consider. This essay will discuss both views and prove my points.
To begin with, these days advertising industry has developed stronger than ever before. As a larger number of business company still spends lots of money on advertising, we are able to see advertisements everywhere, from the Internet to TV and big advertising boards on the roads. It affects our lives considerably, controlling our minds in selecting products. For instance, you have an intention in buying a phone, but when you come into a store, you find out that if you paid a little more money, you can have a much more modern phone. That's how advertisements work in general: depending on human's mentality to persuade people to buy thing that are sounded "more fashionable" or "better for your health". Moreover, children are likely to be addicted with colorful and funny advertisements, therefore they would try to persuade parents to buy products that they think are good and interesting.
On the other hand, advertisements appear in every aspects of our lives, hence some people get bored with them and no longer care. Companies are competing to get more consumers, but sometimes their campaigns may go wrong and their advertisements may not work out. For instance, there is an excessive number of medicine advertisement on TV with the same slogan "improve health", "strengthen physical condition" and "pay back if not useful", which bores audience and people don't want to see similar advertisements while watching TV.
In conclusion, advertising still plays an important role in promoting campaigns of producers in order to reach consumers as it's a traditional way to introduce products with more improved visual. In my point of view, even though some advertisements make people feel boring, they still attract buyers, especially kids.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, if, may, moreover, so, still, then, therefore, well, while, for instance, in conclusion, in general, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1805.0 1615.20841683 112% => OK
No of words: 338.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.34023668639 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28774723029 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.25577299133 2.80592935109 116% => OK
Unique words: 215.0 176.041082164 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.636094674556 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 553.5 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.7584123374 49.4020404114 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.928571429 106.682146367 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.1428571429 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.3571428571 7.06120827912 147% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.285767263484 0.244688304435 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0991421553564 0.084324248473 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0726889075234 0.0667982634062 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.174831960635 0.151304729494 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0607488180754 0.056905535591 107% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.99 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.56 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.