Some folks believe that each household is not reusing junks in an adequate amount and it is their view that the sole approach to escalate regenerating is for regimes to enforce law with regard to reprocessing debris. However, i believe that a part from upholding measures by the ministry, they ought to impart citizens decent education on the importance of redeeming rubbish and make full provisions. This essay will first discuss acts of the government and secondly, how teaching and catering necessities can generate positive stimulations on citizens.
To begin with, presumably, the regency beco...
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Essay evaluation report
flaws:
'presumably' is used two times.
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Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 8.0 out of 9
Category: Excellent Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 11 15
No. of Words: 315 350
No. of Characters: 1726 1500
No. of Different Words: 214 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.213 4.7
Average Word Length: 5.479 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.849 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 138 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 116 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 81 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 51 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 28.636 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 7.265 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 1 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.329 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.595 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.045 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 227, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...regard to reprocessing debris. However, i believe that a part from upholding meas...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, still, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, to begin with, with regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1767.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 315.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.60952380952 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21286593061 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.921807908 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 214.0 176.041082164 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.679365079365 0.561755894193 121% => OK
syllable_count: 543.6 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 44.1501944438 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 160.636363636 106.682146367 151% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.6363636364 20.7667163134 138% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.7272727273 7.06120827912 180% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.154808511806 0.244688304435 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0463296572365 0.084324248473 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0335442604135 0.0667982634062 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0777387990333 0.151304729494 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.027311673042 0.056905535591 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.3 13.0946893788 147% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.6 50.2224549098 69% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 11.3001002004 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.85 12.4159519038 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.04 8.58950901804 129% => OK
difficult_words: 120.0 78.4519038076 153% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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