Some people claim that not enough of the waste from homes is recycled. They say that the only way to increase recycling is for governments to make it a legal requirement. To what extent do you think laws are needed to make people recycle more of their waste?
the problem of pollution is a global issue nowadays and various environmentalists claim that the most profound way to deal with this is recycling domestic waste. But many people do not participate in this measure to solve the issue.
Personally, I strongly corborate the idea of implementing laws to make recycling method more accessible to people so that they can support the government in detaining pollution.
As it is very well known that public never cooperates with authorities unless they are compelled to do so especially when it means to make individual efforts to bring about a change. Hence, making strict rules and laws is the prime need in journey towards sustainable future.
The government can impose penalities whenever someone refuses to reuse their material possessions, particularly those which are not easily damaged. A convention should be made to separate the househould waste on the basis of its ability to be recovered, for example, glass and plastic objects do not degrade over million years and they can be used over and over again. If such objects get damaged then members of local municipal councils should make some arrangements to take them to factories from homes for further recycling process.
Moreover, the government should impose regulations for using cloth and paper bags whenever people go shopping as they do not deploit the environment and can be reused, unlike plastic bags.
Our future is our own responsibility and we are liable for the peace and cleanliness that our upcoming generetions will get. If we are not concerned about it then the damage is on us.
Hence, it is very important to implement laws to make people work with the government to have a clean and green future.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, if, moreover, so, then, well, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1457.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 285.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.11228070175 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10876417139 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83082883171 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.6 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 460.8 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.76152304609 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.8971699466 49.4020404114 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.416666667 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.75 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.41666666667 7.06120827912 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.38176352705 160% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.308750474679 0.244688304435 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0956057293652 0.084324248473 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0648825208949 0.0667982634062 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130475435259 0.151304729494 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0635737688074 0.056905535591 112% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.66 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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