Some people claim that not enough of the waste from homes is recycled. They say that the only way to increase recycling is for governments to make it a legal requirement.
To what extent do you think laws are needed to make people recycle more of their waste?
As a matter of fact, most of household wastes are not being recycled and end up in landfills. I think governments should have more regulations and law enforcement to make people take more responsibilities and I personally think that governments should be a huge part in this by address this problem in many ways
As far as I am concerned, a new recycling law should make recycling become mandatory in every houses, it can require everybody to label and categorized trash into different bins and different recycle purposes. Those who failed to obey and follow this law can be face punishments, ranging from fines to community service and even in prison if that person don’t change such behavior. In the end the improved behavior of homeowners could lead to a clean, waste-free environment for everyone.
Another side that I want law makers also focus on education. Children should be teach about environment and impact of wastes on our environment, Because of that I think we should have curriculum for this. We should have high environmental tax on one time used plastic products and divert this money into recycling facilities and systems, so that wastes can be processed more effectively and even can turn it into energy for our daily live activities.
In conclusion, I think that we should make recycling become legal requirement but at the same time we still have to change people behaviours and habits because only regulations are not only the way to encourage people to dispose their waste more responsibly.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 81, Rule ID: SHOULD_BE_DO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'taught'?
Suggestion: taught
... focus on education. Children should be teach about environment and impact of wastes ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, still, i think, in conclusion, as a matter of fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1276.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 254.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.02362204724 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99216450694 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9024480785 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.582677165354 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 414.0 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 20.2975951904 153% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 112.365961817 49.4020404114 227% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 159.5 106.682146367 150% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.75 20.7667163134 153% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.625 7.06120827912 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.285170070542 0.244688304435 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.11675121089 0.084324248473 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0894396436492 0.0667982634062 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.194720298991 0.151304729494 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0722958800535 0.056905535591 127% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.1 13.0946893788 138% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.01 50.2224549098 80% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 11.3001002004 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.43 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.84 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 9.78957915832 194% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.1190380762 142% => OK
text_standard: 19.0 10.7795591182 176% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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