Some people claim that not enough of the waste from homes is recycled. They say that the only way to increase recycling is for governments to make it a legal requirement. To what extent do you think laws are needed to make people recycle more of their was

All around the world, people are producing more and more waste because of improving the standard of living.This is a potential environmental catastrophe which can be mitigated by taking some steps including recycling. Some individuals opine that recycling should be make a legal requirement by government which preserve our environment as well reuse the waste materials and I wholeheartedly endorse this position.

Majority of humans are well-known the pros of recyling and they always showing their irresponsibility by throwing the garbage into street or on landfills which not only enhance the number of flies and mosquitoes but also very bad impact upon the health on individuals such as stomach pain, typhoid, malaria and skin diseases. That's a main reason that government should take a strict action towards the reckless nature of masses.

Waste management will be increased when the goverenment take a fewer steps to ameliorate it. Firstly, government create awareness among youngsters about the benefits of recycling and also provide deep education about the consequences of throwing waste. For instance, the new prime minister of india has started a 'Swach Bharat Abhiyan'. The main motive of this programme is that to make the india clean and more healthy by reducing household wastage. In addition, schools and colleges should provide the lessons on waste management in their curriculum. It makes the juveniles to more conscious about environmental damage at an early age.

Secondly, government should provide subsidies to those families who take a advantages from biogas plant by using a waste material. By providing a highly reward to these individuals always created a positive attitude among human-beings. What's more to impose a heavy fine and imprisonment on people who violate the government rules. Thirdly, recycling plays an crucial role in promoting an eco-friendly environment by waste management. For exemplify, In Brazil and India, mostly farmers and mills providing a sugarcane waste which is reuse to produce electricity.

In my opinion, recycling is a best method to reduce the wastage in all over the world. enacting a law that makes recycling a legal requirement which will definitely encourage humans to adopt this practice in a daily life.

Votes
Average: 8.4 (1 vote)

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, well, for instance, in addition, such as, in my opinion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 19.0 8.3376753507 228% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1923.0 1615.20841683 119% => OK
No of words: 356.0 315.596192385 113% => OK
Chars per words: 5.40168539326 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34372677135 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97446710373 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 210.0 176.041082164 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.589887640449 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 616.5 506.74238477 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.9608190011 49.4020404114 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.117647059 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9411764706 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.29411764706 7.06120827912 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.251097624541 0.244688304435 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0709740357565 0.084324248473 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0432757018114 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131217942671 0.151304729494 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0446603314677 0.056905535591 78% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.04 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.46 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 109.0 78.4519038076 139% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.5 9.78957915832 199% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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