some people claim that not enough of the waste from homes is recycled they say that the only way to increase recycling is for governments to make it a legal requirement.
to what extent do you think laws are needed to make people recycle more of their waste?
Human population is growing rapidly as well as waste which we were throwing outside significant increasing. Certain individual sentenced the waste from the homes are not recycled as much as and saying that the better to rising that reproduce debris by making legal requirement. I agree with this and this was needed to make the laws for more recycle.
firstly, The authorities have to built the more recycling facilities to the public. this requirement is utilise to reduce the things.for instance, in India, the Telangana state had initiated the collecting the waste from homes by way of dry and wet garbage separately for better resolve. Another aspect is the legal administrator's should to give the orders to municipal corporations whose were responsible for any contaminate would appear in road sides and empty plots. For example, the plastic bottle recycling machines are available to us on certain public places and this is beneficial to built like that. Moreover, this requirement from the government is leads to clean society from excess things.
It is often to say that the laws are more powerful influence to follow in our society. The first change take place in public then jointed with authority would results into greenery. The crucial laws are guiding the people's to recycle of they own debris is effective way which is to reduce the some efforts. Finally, implementing of this deadlines are necessary for self awareness in peoples have better place.
To conclude, the ecosystem retain by awareness came from humans which we have to reproduce our own garbage and and also other things to reduce. although we should walk-in guidelines of governments for future a clear path.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Firstly
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Suggestion: utilised
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, firstly, if, moreover, so, then, well, for example, for instance, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1420.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 277.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.12635379061 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07962216107 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69046333743 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.584837545126 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 457.2 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.1883321477 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.428571429 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7857142857 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.06120827912 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.01903807615 259% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.305033126573 0.244688304435 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0974905616942 0.084324248473 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0790993819381 0.0667982634062 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.174397003408 0.151304729494 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.088733888834 0.056905535591 156% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.03 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.