Some people do not go directly to college but travel or work for a short time. Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?
It is contended that studying postgraduate level or higher education would lead humankind to a brighter future. However, numerous young generations are choosing to work or travel for a while instead of going directly to universities these days. While there are divided opinions, I strongly opine that enrolling in college instantly is far from the best method.
It is impossible to argue against the risks when discovering the world or becoming inexperienced labour, chiefly financial issues. There are limited jobs for teenagers who have not been trained. Therefore, the living cost would be a challenge when they cannot afford utility bills, food, and accommodation fee. They could be the cost burden for their parents and their whole family.
On the other hand, taking gap years benefits adolescents by giving them time to truly understand themselves and find out the genuine career path as well as goals for life. Besides, student can join charity organizations; during these activities, it is easily to gain experiences and soft skills. Several surveys proved that working at these projects nurtures minors’ mind, soul and guides them to be independent people. In fact, numerous universities around the world encourage students to take gap years, namely Havard.
In brief, taking gap years are developing as a popular global trend; Meanwhile, this tactic is appropriate for certain people, especially who has high self-awareness.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, however, if, so, therefore, well, while, in brief, in fact, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 41.998997996 48% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1227.0 1615.20841683 76% => OK
No of words: 225.0 315.596192385 71% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.45333333333 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.87298334621 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83677438103 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.724444444444 0.561755894193 129% => OK
syllable_count: 372.6 506.74238477 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.5135443515 49.4020404114 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.25 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.75 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.16666666667 7.06120827912 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.102448521413 0.244688304435 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0329466405967 0.084324248473 39% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0468777310393 0.0667982634062 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0562628645023 0.151304729494 37% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0398983143693 0.056905535591 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.33 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.79 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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