In the future the main reason for going to the shopping mall will be for entertainment not to shop.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
In today’s world of mass consumerism, it has become something of a norm for people to loiter in shopping centers after work and on weekends. There are some opinions assumed that entertainment would be the primary reason when it comes to malls. However, I believe this assumption is not suitable to society as a whole.
With the shopping precincts providing exclusive and unique stuffs, these areas become prestige places for purchasing high-end products. Comparing with retail stores, the price here is more expensive but go with it is the certainly quality of things. Everything sold in shopping centers supplied from dignity brands which through various testing stages before coming to consumers’ hand. Besides, the common mall or shopping centers explosion around all major cities and towns witnessed the dramatical development of sales in malls.
On the other hand, a great number of people are selecting shopping at malls as their favorable activity. It is impossible to argue against the fact that ambling inside these malls whilst window shopping for luxury brands would be a satisfying feeling. Moreover, these malls are not just for shopping, but also appropriate for ones who requires other utilities, such as: restaurants and beverages stores. There are also the air-conditioning to consider, especially in summer weather when the temperature can reach forty degrees in numerous zones over the world.
In brief, while people can find out happiness at shopping malls, purchasing products will remain to be the most vital reason. In the future, there is an increasing tendency for people choosing shopping centers to buying things since citizens can go for shopping and enjoy diverse utilities at the same time.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 194, Rule ID: AFFORD_VBG[1]
Message: This verb is used with infinitive: 'to shop'.
Suggestion: to shop
...increasing tendency for people choosing shopping centers to buying things since citizens...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, however, moreover, so, while, in brief, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1464.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 274.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.34306569343 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0685311056 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70157808737 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.649635036496 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 441.9 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 26.8660935428 49.4020404114 54% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 112.615384615 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0769230769 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.61538461538 7.06120827912 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.321142166397 0.244688304435 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101865155669 0.084324248473 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0651951769373 0.0667982634062 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.190115612182 0.151304729494 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0443566805646 0.056905535591 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.69 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.17 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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