More and more people these days work harder and longer hours and have no time for family life and friends. What are the causes in your opinion for this? How it is affecting family life and society as a whole?
It is contended that a growing number of employees have to spend more time on their jobs and make light of family and friends. Commonly, some reasons related to money have led to these issues and they will make relationships goes worse.
It is impossible to argue against the financial pressures that adults suffered, They need a significant amount of money for these utility bills and basic needs, including raising their children and family. These things require a lot of fees and all depend on their income. Besides, there are some people who want to achieve higher positions in their careers, they are ambitious and could do anything for their goals, comprising overwork in the evenings and even the weekends.
As a result, when spending too much time and effort on work, they will have not sufficient time for their family, friends and other relationships. Especially, children who grow up in these families would do not receive enough love and would not be taught to be warm-hearted citizens.
In brief, financial causes are the primary reasons for overworking. This problem could lead to a bad future for their own kids in particular and reduce positive relationships in society in general.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, if, so, in brief, in general, in particular, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 41.998997996 55% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 0.0 8.3376753507 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1009.0 1615.20841683 62% => OK
No of words: 200.0 315.596192385 63% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.045 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76060309309 4.20363070211 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6465779792 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 125.0 176.041082164 71% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.625 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 307.8 506.74238477 61% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.6613753614 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.111111111 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2222222222 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.22222222222 7.06120827912 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.203832295705 0.244688304435 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0829162844478 0.084324248473 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0442557582108 0.0667982634062 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123016119427 0.151304729494 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0292251176929 0.056905535591 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.25 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.68 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 78.4519038076 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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