In the future the main reason for going to the shopping mall will be for entertainment not to shop.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
In today’s world of mass consumerism, it has become something of a norm for people to loiter in shopping centers after work and on weekends. There are some opinions assumed that entertainment would be the primary reason when it comes to malls. However, I believe this idea is not suitable for society as a whole.
With the shopping precincts providing exclusive and unique goods, these areas have become prestige places for purchasing high-end products. Compared with retail stores, the price here is higher, but it is the unquestionable quality of things. Everything sold in shopping centers is supplied by dignity brands through various testing stages before coming into consumers’ hands. Besides, the ordinary mall or shopping centers explosion around all major cities and towns witnessed the dramatic development of sales in malls.
On the other hand, a significant number of people are selecting shopping at malls as their favorite activity. It is impossible to argue against the fact that ambling inside these malls while window shopping for luxury brands would be a satisfying feeling. Moreover, these places are not just for shopping but also appropriate for ones who require other utilities, such as restaurants and beverages stores. There is also the air-conditioning to consider, especially in summer weather when the temperature can reach forty degrees in numerous worldwide zones.
In brief, while people can find happiness at shopping malls, purchasing products will remain the most important reason. In the future, there is an increasing tendency for people to choose shopping centers to buy things since citizens can go shopping and enjoy various utilities simultaneously.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 189, Rule ID: AFFORD_VBG[1]
Message: This verb is used with infinitive: 'to shop'.
Suggestion: to shop
...ncreasing tendency for people to choose shopping centers to buy things since citizens ca...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, however, if, moreover, so, while, in brief, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1440.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 264.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.45454545455 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03089032464 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82268904803 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.647727272727 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 440.1 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 26.6631407925 49.4020404114 54% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 110.769230769 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3076923077 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.92307692308 7.06120827912 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.319303051202 0.244688304435 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.104148552604 0.084324248473 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0584315096068 0.0667982634062 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.191546262783 0.151304729494 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.03336565939 0.056905535591 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.33 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.17 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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