Some people feel that boarding schools (where students or pupils live at the school during the term) are an excellent option for children, while other people disagree for a number of reasons. Consider both sides of this debate and reach a conclusion
It is often said that children benefit the most attending a boarding school, especially in today’s competitive world, where excellence is a must. However, this notion is not completely straightforward, and arguments can also be made against the idea. This essay will discuss the debate, and reach a concluding view.
On the one hand, those who support boarding schools cite various possible advantages that the institutions might offer to the youngsters. These range from profound academic achievements, to learning essential life skills that might guide them in their adult life. Examples can be seen in many traditional boarding facilities, where they hire qualified professionals to equip their students with the latest knowledge and technologies, leading to an all-round education to the pupils. Also, these students can focus better on their studies because television, video games, mobile phone and other distractions are limited, creating an environment conducive to learning. Moreover, those who attend this type of schools not only learn quickly many useful domestic chores, but also complete their school assignments by themselves. In this way, they become expert at managing their time, money and resources, allowing them to become independent and more likely to succeed in college and life as well. Thus, boarding school ensures academic progression as well as personal growth.
By contrast, opponents of the view point out that those who attend boarding schools, become institutionalised, meaning that these people can not adapt well outside the regulated framework of school. In addition, many fears that the teachers are not substitute for their parents as it is completely impossible to replicate behaviours of the parents and the children do not learn much from their parents. To illustrate, these children lack ideal role models and can be influenced greatly by peer pressure. Finally, it is possible for some young people to suffer from various mental health problems as all children cannot adapt quickly in a restricted environment. For instance, research into boarding schools have revealed that a great many percentages of students are suffering from mental illness due to lack of emotional supports.
Overall, it appears that despite various drawbacks, interests of the children are better served when they study in a boarding school as these institutions tend to provide academic achievements as well as lay foundation stone for personal developments.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 986, Rule ID: ALSO_SENT_END[1]
Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: as well
...e likely to succeed in college and life also. Thus, boarding school ensures academic...
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Line 6, column 736, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun percentage seems to be countable; consider using: 'many percentages'.
Suggestion: many percentages
...ding schools have revealed that a great many percentage of students are suffering from mental i...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, however, if, moreover, so, thus, well, for instance, in addition, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 24.0651302605 154% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2110.0 1615.20841683 131% => OK
No of words: 380.0 315.596192385 120% => OK
Chars per words: 5.55263157895 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.41515443553 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91951595426 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 222.0 176.041082164 126% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.584210526316 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 633.6 506.74238477 125% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.6574201404 49.4020404114 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.875 106.682146367 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.75 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 7.06120827912 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.231015499228 0.244688304435 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0733544136525 0.084324248473 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0396955110971 0.0667982634062 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137086934528 0.151304729494 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0250346505289 0.056905535591 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.6 13.0946893788 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.21 12.4159519038 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.51 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 114.0 78.4519038076 145% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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