Some people feel that certain workers like nurses, doctors and teachers are undervalued and should be paid more, especially when other people like film actors or company bosses are paid huge sums of money that are out of proportion to the importance of the work that they do.
How far do you agree?
What criterion should be used to decide how much people are paid?
It is true that certain professionals like doctors, nurses and teachers/scholars are paid less than the movie stars or company bosses. However, no one can deny the significance attachment of doctors with the society, in my opinion the discrimination of income among these professions are because of popularity in the public.
Firstly, to be in the public eye isn’t easy, it requires great commitments, hard work to sustain popularity, it s not true that everybody in the film industry occupy similar recognition, however, only small percentage of those people reached at top level and earn enormous salary and secure luxury life style, for example; Shah Rukh Khan, a well known bollywood star who switched his life after continuous struggle from theatre actor to film star later become king of Bollywood, his current salary is around 20 million.
Secondly, the life of the actors is merely 5 to 10 years, their popularity relies on physical fitness, and the survival in the industry requires immense hard work. For example, Pakistani popular singer of her time had died recently in a poor condition; therefore, the fact of undersized years of job should not be overlooked.
Whereas, professions such as doctors , nurses and teachers are permanent careers, their salaries rises by the passage of time, they do follow life schedule and does nominal effort to justify job demand, however film starts as they gets older their income gets shrink simultaneously.
In conclusion the comparison between two fields is not maintainable, bosses, movie starts and other profession earn on the basis of talent, skills, and academic achievement.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, look, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, whereas, for example, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1390.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 262.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.30534351145 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02323427807 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90633116354 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.690839694656 0.561755894193 123% => OK
syllable_count: 428.4 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 16.0721442886 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 37.0 20.2975951904 182% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 126.829308401 49.4020404114 257% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 198.571428571 106.682146367 186% => OK
Words per sentence: 37.4285714286 20.7667163134 180% => OK
Discourse Markers: 20.7142857143 7.06120827912 293% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.124182486732 0.244688304435 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0538820321806 0.084324248473 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0525349079329 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0581352191451 0.151304729494 38% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0372105585855 0.056905535591 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 22.3 13.0946893788 170% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.92 50.2224549098 68% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.7 11.3001002004 157% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.11 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.53 8.58950901804 123% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.5 9.78957915832 199% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.8 10.1190380762 166% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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