Many people believe that women make better parents than men and that is why they have the greater role in raising children in most societies. Others claim that men are just as good as women at parenting.
Write an essay expressing your point of view.
Give reasons for your answers and provide relevant
The experience of parenthood is unbelievable, however, it is difficult to decide which member of the family contribute more or less, although, both father and mother play their role to raise their children and they work tirelessly to establish him/her a valuable member of the society. In my opinion women are far healthier parent than men.
Firstly, the joy of becoming parent is amazing; the majority of the women spend plenty of time with children, in regions like East Asian women do not prefer to do job after baby, their duty switched to household chores and good care of kid, in this way mothers gets emotionally attached with kids and become more close than men.
Secondly, it is the mother who carries baby up to 9 months in her abdomen, the love of the baby cannot calculate, she feels his/her movement throughout period bears unaccountable pain during the birth. I think without any doubt it is vivid that women outweigh men.
On the other hand, the contribution of men cannot overlook, men struggle too much to provide his family better financial needs, and he provides shelter, food and the basic necessities of the family, although the women at one end help to raise kid but father at the other end fulfill desire of the family.
In conclusion the importance of father and mother cannot be calculated, rather judging which side of the balance is higher I think it is better to say balance contribution of the both is the only way to raise children.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 167, Rule ID: BASIC_FUNDAMENTALS[1]
Message: Use simply 'necessities'.
Suggestion: necessities
..., and he provides shelter, food and the basic necessities of the family, although the women at on...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, look, second, secondly, so, i think, in conclusion, in my opinion, more or less, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1225.0 1615.20841683 76% => OK
No of words: 254.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.82283464567 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99216450694 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56441896976 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.614173228346 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 381.6 506.74238477 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 16.0721442886 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 36.0 20.2975951904 177% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 103.319002737 49.4020404114 209% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 175.0 106.682146367 164% => OK
Words per sentence: 36.2857142857 20.7667163134 175% => OK
Discourse Markers: 18.8571428571 7.06120827912 267% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.216542752943 0.244688304435 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105303628482 0.084324248473 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0674189633359 0.0667982634062 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107606974999 0.151304729494 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0452807658253 0.056905535591 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.4 13.0946893788 148% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.4 50.2224549098 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.2 11.3001002004 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.27 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.15 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 9.78957915832 184% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.4 10.1190380762 162% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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