Some people think certain prisoners should be made to do unpaid community work instead of being put behind bars. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
In order to create a safe and sustainable environment, officials should reform the society. I do agree up to some extent that those criminals who commit low level crime must be made to do unpaid work. While, severe criminals should be put behind the bars.
There are number of ways available where certain prisoners / criminals can be assignedan unpaid work instead of putting them behind the bars.For instance, cleaning streets, planting trees and working for charity are suitable tasks where these offenders may be asked to do such works. This may help to reduce the environment problems and provide opportunity to lawbreakers to keep themselves engaged in society beneficial activities. Although, this strategy may increase in number of crimes because the offenders feel themselves free even after doing wrong things but in parallel this is quite an effective way to make such criminals realize to tread on right path.
On the contrary, the brutal Offenders who are involved in serious Crime like Murder, Hijacking, Rape, Abduction and so on / the like / so forth on, they must be punished and put behind bars in order to set an example in the society so that no one can be ableto take such wrong steps to ruin anyone’s life. Besides this, nature of crime should be taken in to account. For example, if a child steals food from a store as his mother is starving in completely a different scenario than someone robbing an old lady. The former deserves a second chance while the second should be imprisoned.
To recapitulate, someone with no criminal record and if found in slight misconduct must be treated differently than serious killers. The objective of the law is to maintain peace in the society, not to punish people. Thus unpaid community services is a great chance for criminals to bring them back to their normal life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, if, may, second, so, thus, while, for example, for instance, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1537.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 309.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.97411003236 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1926597562 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63976312554 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.618122977346 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 478.8 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 80.5285057398 49.4020404114 163% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.230769231 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.7692307692 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.92307692308 7.06120827912 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.31918711783 0.244688304435 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106605763708 0.084324248473 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.114583910609 0.0667982634062 172% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.195369964002 0.151304729494 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.123574327566 0.056905535591 217% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.76 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.