Some people feel that young people should follow the traditions of their society. Others, however, believe that young people should be free to behave as individuals. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Nowadays, there is a strong debate on whether the youth should follow their social traditions. While some people assume that the young generation had better follow their nation’s cultures, others believe they reserve the right to make their own choice. I personally think that the youth of today should be given some room to decide on how they want to lead their lives.
On the one hand, there is no denying that traditions have remained an integral part of human life which illustrate the priceless wisdom garnered by ancestors over the ages, and therefore contain many valuable ideas.
For example, in Vietnam, the notion of hard work and determination would lead to success and fulfillment is of great importance regardless of timeline and types of job. In addition, holding firm to the national tradition’s means remaining steadfast in patriotism, which has been long considered a vital component for a prosperous nation. Thus, the youth who are going to be the future of any society, seem to have the responsibility of carrying forward these traditions.
On the other hand, it is understandable why some young people tend to have a lifestyle without following their countries’ traditions. Firstly, some traditional ideas of the old are outdated to younger generations. For instance, the idea related to gender inequality of older times which was justified has become intolerable in today’s world. Secondly, young people have been exposed to conditions that are largely different from the ones that existed in the past. The new environment and the emerging world order need the younger generation to be more creative, adaptive, and able to find its destiny with a new perspective, and the old traditions are not in any way able to cater to aspirations. Hence, young people completely have the right to not follow their countries’ customs and to freely behave as individuals, in order to meet the social needs.
In conclusion, even though both arguments have their own merits, I tend to believe that it should be better to swim against the current to have a better life. Blind imitation from traditions is not acceptable any more. It is the time that young people make their own traditions by making new decisions.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, hence, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, while, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1875.0 1615.20841683 116% => OK
No of words: 367.0 315.596192385 116% => OK
Chars per words: 5.10899182561 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37689890912 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81523744112 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 204.0 176.041082164 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.555858310627 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 579.6 506.74238477 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.7062205148 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.1875 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.9375 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0625 7.06120827912 128% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.322022107449 0.244688304435 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102912165333 0.084324248473 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0891163092181 0.0667982634062 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.16311934815 0.151304729494 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.11395683917 0.056905535591 200% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.9 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 78.4519038076 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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