Some people prefer to live in a house, while others feel that there are more advantages to living in an apartment. Are there more advantages than the disadvantage of living in a house compared to living in an apartment.
There is no doubt that owning a residential place is a very important aspect in a person’s life. While few believe that, living in a house is a better choice, others argue that living in an apartment has more benefits than drawbacks. In this essay, I will discuss both the views and explain my support for the latter view with relevant examples.
On the one hand, building a house is not only a necessity but a dream for many people. This is because, people can discuss and plan the construction pattern, which is important to make a house beautiful and spacious. By planning in such a way every area of the house is utilized intelligently. For example, children love to play in their garden having great family time together. The housemaker can have her own kitchen- garden to grow fresh vegetables of her choice. In contrast, it becomes difficult to ensure the safety of the house from criminals. As a result, the residents are usually anxious and thus spend more by keeping individual guards. To ensure about the safety of the house, its people and be stressed about it depends upon an individual’s nature and personality.
On the other hand, staying in an apartment is safe and more cost effective. The reason for this is, the presence of security guards and constant camera surveillance, which ensures the protection of the residents. For instance, no person can enter without identification at the reception and an affirmation from the apartment resident. In contrast, privacy is not maintained due to neighbors living in very close proximity. As a result, family issues tend to become public and a matter of humiliation. It depends on a person’s nature to control the family environment in a positive manner even when living among many people.
In the end, living in an apartment or a house is one’s own preference and financial constraint. Happiness has nothing to do with the size or location of the place.
In conclusion, while living in a house has its own benefits, in my opinion apartments have more advantages for a person than disadvantages.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use simply 'proximity'.
Suggestion: proximity
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Message: Consider replacing "in a positive manner" with adverb for "positive"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...ature to control the family environment in a positive manner even when living among many people. I...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, thus, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in contrast, no doubt, as a result, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1732.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 351.0 315.596192385 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.93447293447 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32839392791 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96220130469 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 176.041082164 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.547008547009 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 558.9 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.76152304609 210% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 23.6056666926 49.4020404114 48% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 86.6 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.55 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.8 7.06120827912 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.287561768979 0.244688304435 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0781427549951 0.084324248473 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.106619997657 0.0667982634062 160% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.184878234794 0.151304729494 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0641998866564 0.056905535591 113% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 13.0946893788 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.02 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.12 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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