Some people prefer to spend their lives doing the same things and avoiding change. Others, however, think that change is always a good thing. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Due to several individual opinions about spending a meaningful life, it leads to many arguments on whether people should be stable and avoid changes or not. As far as I am concerned, I believe that it depends on situations and kinds of changes that a person is into.
There are many rationales standing behind the perspective that people have to change, the most significant of which relate to new experiences. To be more specific, changes could bring benefits to adolescents who necessitate learning new things. For instance, youngers who have fortune enough to live and study abroad could expose to many cultures and perceive the amount of knowledge which is usually not available in their own countries. Therefore, they could be able to broaden their horizon and become more mature than others. Besides, if persons always live in comfort-zones, they will hardly cope with adversities which could suddenly happen in reality.
In contrast, being stable would be appropriate choices in some situations. Family is one of the many core values that people could not change. It demands loyalty and appreciation rather than changes. Because of this, people have to show their love and keep doing this every day to maintain this sacred relationship. Furthermore, pursuing dreams and following passion are also the things that need a lot of patience. People have to train themselves frequently to gain success, which doesn't seem to be a boring thing to do. It is analogous to a sportsman who has been practicing for years just to have their best performances in stages.
In conclusion, it depends on which values people appreciate to decide whether it should be changed or not.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 96, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun core seems to be countable; consider using: 'many cores'.
Suggestion: many cores
...n some situations. Family is one of the many core values that people could not change. It...
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Line 3, column 482, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
...elves frequently to gain success, which doesnt seem to be a boring thing to do. It is ...
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Line 4, column 50, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'appreciate deciding'.
Suggestion: appreciate deciding
...sion, it depends on which values people appreciate to decide whether it should be changed or not.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, furthermore, if, so, therefore, for instance, in conclusion, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1400.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 276.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.07246376812 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76984163524 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.61231884058 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 429.3 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.750456787 49.4020404114 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.3333333333 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.8 7.06120827912 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.183654083634 0.244688304435 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.055580364516 0.084324248473 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0359191111291 0.0667982634062 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111930471555 0.151304729494 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0275739835208 0.056905535591 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.82 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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