Some people prefer to spend their lives doing the same things and avoiding change. Others, however, think that change is always a good thing.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
With the fact that more lifestyles are made available through the improvements in quality of life, some are inclined toward the idea of a peaceful life with minimal changes to their ways. However, others prefer to lead a more colorful life. Personally, I am supportive of the latter opinion.
On the one hand, leading a life by following a routine has its fair share of advantages. It is a safer way to live and a more peaceful choice when it comes to settling down for people living with families. Living by doing the same things is the best way to avoid any surprising shifts that can lead to unhappy outcomes as there is nothing that cannot be predicted. Furthermore, it is also an effective method to raise children as parents can spend more time nurturing their offspring. Therefore, it is not unreasonable that people, especially those in their adult's ages, prefer this way of life.
On the other ones, learning to accept changes can be a fun and intuitive way to spend one's life. By stepping out of one's comfort zone, he or she has more opportunities to have new and meaningful experiences. Moreover, it is a good way to take up skills that can be of great help in unfamiliar situations. By taking risks and gaining the rewards, one can truly enrich both their financial and emotional status, attaining a higher adoration of life. Hence, it is easy to understand people's pursuit of this lifestyle.
In conclusion, it is an arduous task to decide the winner in this case. However, with all the aforementioned points, I am certain that, in my opinion, leading a life full of surprises and changes is a much more satisfying and fulfilling lifestyle.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, hence, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1374.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 289.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.75432525952 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12310562562 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78227373955 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.584775086505 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 444.6 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.7291323529 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.6 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2666666667 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.13333333333 7.06120827912 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.149234556144 0.244688304435 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0479151658994 0.084324248473 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0377982511011 0.0667982634062 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0864837932243 0.151304729494 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0338235325295 0.056905535591 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 13.0946893788 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.27 12.4159519038 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.29 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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