Some people say that advertising encourages us to buy things that we really do not need. Others say that advertisements tell us about new products that may improves our lives.
Which view of point do you agree with?
Nowadays, advertising has become a key part of business and it's impact on consumers is becoming increasingly controversial. While some people thinks that advertising motivate individuals' to purchase items that they are not making use of, others opines that advertisement inform us about the latest items that may help our lives in a positive way. I strongly agree with the latter opinion as advertising has succeeded in helping us to be informed about the variety of latest product available.
On one hand, many advertisements in today's world focuses on children. This has influenced children to put pressure on their parent to get them what they really do not need and inability of parent to get them what they desire may impairs their relationship. For example, my mother was pressurized by my younger brother of age 4 to get a latest toy after watching an advertisement of latest toys. Whereas, he has several toys in which one is similar to the new product. Also, advertising industry makes use of glamorous, successful and famous celebrities in branding their products. Most of these products are purchased not because they are needed but because our favourite celebrities makes use of them
On the other hand, people are aware of new products with the help of advertisements. When new items are manufactured, they are publisized on medias for people to be aware. Although this products may have it's own disadvantages, it's advantages often outweighs it's disadvantages and thereby improves our lives in better ways. I recently bought a microwave through online shopping after watching it's advertisement, this has helped me to get my food warm quickly and thereby prevent me from taken cold food.
In conclusion, advertisement is becoming increasingly popular in our modern days. Although it makes people to buy what they really do not need, it's positive effects on our lives when we are informed of new product can not be neglected.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 329, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a positive way" with adverb for "positive"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...he latest items that may help our lives in a positive way. I strongly agree with the latter opin...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e with the latter opinion as advertising has succeeded in helping us to be inform...
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Line 1, column 467, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'of the latest'.
Suggestion: of the latest
...ing us to be informed about the variety of latest product available. On one hand, man...
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Message: Use 'the' with the superlative.
Suggestion: the
...d by my younger brother of age 4 to get a latest toy after watching an advertisem...
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Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'of the latest'.
Suggestion: of the latest
...est toy after watching an advertisement of latest toys. Whereas, he has several toys in w...
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Message: “Whereas” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...tching an advertisement of latest toys. Whereas, he has several toys in which one is si...
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Message: Use simply 'celebrities'.
Suggestion: celebrities
... makes use of glamorous, successful and famous celebrities in branding their products. Most of the...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, may, really, so, whereas, while, as for, for example, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 43.0 24.0651302605 179% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1627.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 319.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.10031347962 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22617688928 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98835046472 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.554858934169 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 518.4 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.0635208949 49.4020404114 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.214285714 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.7857142857 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.92857142857 7.06120827912 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.301575961947 0.244688304435 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.099648739335 0.084324248473 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0718324690689 0.0667982634062 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.191169769971 0.151304729494 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0690202480404 0.056905535591 121% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.6 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.64 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.