Some people say that advertising is extremely successful at persuading us to buy things. Other people think that advertising is so common that we no longer pay attention to it.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
For everyone living in modern community, advertising has undoubtedly become a part of our routine that we cannot escape from. On this account, advertising is considered more than successful at leading us to consuming, while others think it is the familiarity that made people lose sight of it. I hold the point that advertising is still an essential way for companies to sell their product or service.
It is true that general public have been surrounded by all kinds of advertisements since businesses existed. Therefore, consumers are more likely to take new arrivals, sales promotion and varieties of marketing tricks for granted. However, I still believe that advertising has a significant influence on customer's choice. Purpose of advertising in a mature business campaign is not as straightforward as a salesman knocking at the door, but to improve brand familiarity among their potential customers, expecting consumers to tend to pick their own product over the competitors when they have the demand. In other words, people cannot ignore advertisements, they're impacted unconsciously instead.
Another group holds the opinion that, with the popularization of Internet, people can easily access real feedback from reviewers, as well as price change from all producers or even the defects advertisement never told you. Consequently, consumers are more rational when making decisions thanks to information transparence. But we cannot ignore that advertising evolved with the Internet simultaneously. There's research shows advertising against online communities such as TikTok, YouTube increased steeply over 100% in past five years, advertisers have been working closer with KOLs and social network celebrities.
In conclusion, despite the fact that the consumers nowadays maybe the hardest to persuade ever, advertising can still have a significant effect on their decisions.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use simply 'public'.
Suggestion: public
...ir product or service. It is true that general public have been surrounded by all kinds of ad...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: they're
...s, people cannot ignore advertisements, theyre impacted unconsciously instead. Anothe...
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Line 3, column 186, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'defects'' or 'defect's'?
Suggestion: defects'; defect's
...e change from all producers or even the defects advertisement never told you. Consequen...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: There's
...olved with the Internet simultaneously. Theres research shows advertising against onli...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, however, if, may, so, still, therefore, well, while, in conclusion, such as, as well as, in other words, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1602.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 284.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.64084507042 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.14295230265 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.669014084507 0.561755894193 119% => OK
syllable_count: 498.6 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.5064513434 49.4020404114 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.230769231 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8461538462 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.3076923077 7.06120827912 146% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.211816502221 0.244688304435 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0719858737656 0.084324248473 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0501843689187 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125268288658 0.151304729494 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0460706639097 0.056905535591 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.1 13.0946893788 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.24 50.2224549098 66% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.43 12.4159519038 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.63 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.