It would be argued by some that spend time taking part in outdoor activities and increase the provision of sports amenities. In my opinion, however, proper health education would be a better measure.
On the one hand, there are a number of reasons why some believe that we must increase the number of sports facilities. The first reason is to spend time participating in physical activities and go to fitness clubs. It is an undeniable fact that increasing the provision of sports amenities gives people more chances to improve basic health problems. For example, my friend goes to the fitness club, she usually tries to eat more vegetables and fruit. Now, she is having a healthy diet and keep fit.
On the other hand, I would argue that this would have little effect on public health and other measures are quired. One of the people taking part in a club or go to the gym but they feel boring and it doesn’t give them the chance to try anything new who an annual gym membership. A person easily avoids some basic health problems if he is equipped with sufficient basic knowledge about health care and medicine. It raises people’s awareness of the importance of health protection. Exempli Gratia, my father knows more about the adverse effect of smoking, he makes every possible effort to don’t smoke and make healthier food choices exercise regularly.
In conclusion, although some people think that take part in sports centers has improved the level of health education. I personally believe that raising public awareness and participation in public health campaigns.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, so, for example, in conclusion, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1315.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 265.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.96226415094 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03470204552 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59246656227 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.588679245283 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 406.8 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.5063198425 49.4020404114 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.9285714286 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9285714286 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.35714285714 7.06120827912 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.321155406372 0.244688304435 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.109070616899 0.084324248473 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.105555337842 0.0667982634062 158% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.187974827265 0.151304729494 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0583331317482 0.056905535591 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.22 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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