Some people say that economic growth is the only way to end hunger and poverty, while others say that economic growth is damaging the environment so it must be stopped. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
It is sometimes argued that economic growth is the sole measure for the tragedy of world hunger and poverty while the others contend that economic growth has a consequence of environment degradation so it must be stopped. I agree completely with the second view.
On the one hand, starving and poverty can be reduced as a result of economic development. The first reason is that poor people have more chances to get higher paying jobs. They will not only afford the basic necessities of life but also be able to support their families and encourage their offspring to pursue higher education. Secondly, governments will have more resource to allocate in social policies which support those citizen who is in need . For instance, the poor will have opportunities to borrow concessional loan from state budget to earn a living by starting their own businesses.
On the other hand, I strongly agree that economic growth can do great harm to the environment. Firstly, many enterprises have been depleting natural resources in attempt to expand their business operation and maximize profit. In the process of producing goods, the incineration of coal, oil and natural gases emits a substantial volume of greenhouse gases. In addition, more and more chemical wastes are disposed directly into water bodies, such as rivers causing death to many kinds of fish as well as other aquatic animals. Finally, timber company cut down the without planting new trees leads to soil erosion and floods.
In conclusion, economic growth which is not sustainable must be prohibited. If it is not based on meeting human needs rather than generating profits, such growth will only create more poverty and hunger in the world by destroying natural resources.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: necessities
...ing jobs. They will not only afford the basic necessities of life but also be able to support th...
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Suggestion:
... necessities of life but also be able to support their families and encourage the...
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Message: Did you mean 'this citizen' or 'those citizens'?
Suggestion: this citizen; those citizens
...locate in social policies which support those citizen who is in need . For instance, the poor...
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Suggestion: .
...ich support those citizen who is in need . For instance, the poor will have opport...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... cut down the without planting new trees leads to soil erosion and floods. In c...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, well, while, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as a result, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1458.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 284.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.1338028169 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.692062818 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.62676056338 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 457.2 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.7214838083 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.142857143 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2857142857 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.0 7.06120827912 170% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.229232637544 0.244688304435 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0758871321898 0.084324248473 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.105076116893 0.0667982634062 157% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.167617027351 0.151304729494 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.121973279691 0.056905535591 214% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.13 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.