Some people say that economic growth is the only way to end hunger and poverty, while others say that economic growth is damaging the environment so it must be stopped. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
In this day and age, it is undeniable that economy has a strong impact to our own country. It is said that economic growth is the only solution end famine and poverty, however, some argued that development in economy is damaging the environment. These two viewpoints have their own pros and cons, so that they will be thoroughly discussed and give final conclusion in this essay.
On the one hand, financial growth plays a significant role in dealing with starvation and poverty. economic activities such as agriculture, manufacture or services are undoubtedly making progress for citizens' lives nowadays. As it is understandable, simply by providing inhabitants with well-paid jobs, these achievements expand the job opportunities which means this will help workers improve their life standard and put an end to hunger. In other words, improving economic stability and security will enhance individual finance in long-term
On the other hand, human is pushing economic growth as much as possible and ignoring environment devastation these day. Firstly, in agriculture, farms are using more chemicals in fertilisers or pesticides which lead to ground erosion and water contamination as well. What is more, a large amount of factories are being built which means more fossil fuel are being burnt and released into our surroundings , therefore, cause huge air pollution to the nature. The important thing is all of the consequences can cause fatal disease such as cancer to human-being and bring them to poverty again. Furthermore, mass production and consumption also results in over-exploitation of natural resources which can cause chronic poverty due to resource depletion
To sum up, every coin has two sides and so does those problems. From my perspective, I think that it is crucial to improve the financial growth but we should take it slow in order not to ruin our efforts
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, so, therefore, well, i think, such as, in other words, to sum up, what is more, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1586.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 302.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.25165562914 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1687104957 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99146836973 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.652317880795 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 497.7 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 48.3427433369 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 132.166666667 106.682146367 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.1666666667 20.7667163134 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.5 7.06120827912 177% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.207951733375 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0680636854542 0.084324248473 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0742199520364 0.0667982634062 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113773549301 0.151304729494 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0541001982311 0.056905535591 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.47 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.69 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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