Some people say that economic growth is the only way to end hunger and poverty, while others say that economic growth is damaging the environment so it must be stopped. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
It is sometimes argued that economic growth is the sole measure for hunger and poverty while I believe that economic growth has a consequence of environment degradation so it must be stopped.
On the one hand, starving and poverty can be reduced as a result of economic development. The first reason is that poor people have more chances to get higher paying jobs. They will be able to not only meet their basic human needs but also support their families and encourage their offspring to pursue higher education. Secondly, governments will have more resource to allocate in social policies which support those citizen who is in need . The poor will have opportunities to borrow concessional loan from state budget to earn a living by starting their own businesses.
On the other hand, I strongly agree that economic growth can do great harm to the environment. Firstly, many enterprises have been depleting natural resources in attempt to expand their business operation and maximize profit. In the process of producing goods, the incineration of coal, oil and natural gases emits a substantial volume of greenhouse gases. In addition, more and more chemical wastes are disposed directly into water bodies, such as rivers causing death to many kinds of fish as well as other aquatic animals. Finally, timbers company cut down the without planting new trees leads to soil erosion and floods.
In conclusion, economic growth which is not sustainable must be prohibited. If it is not based on meeting human needs rather than generating profits, such growth will only create more poverty and hunger in the world by destroying natural resources.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'this citizen' or 'those citizens'?
Suggestion: this citizen; those citizens
...locate in social policies which support those citizen who is in need . The poor will have opp...
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Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...ich support those citizen who is in need . The poor will have opportunities to bor...
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Line 5, column 591, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... cut down the without planting new trees leads to soil erosion and floods. In c...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, well, while, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as a result, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1381.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 269.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13382899628 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6844290123 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.628252788104 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 432.0 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.5113116406 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.230769231 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6923076923 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.8461538462 7.06120827912 168% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.215251769321 0.244688304435 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0780702556663 0.084324248473 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.108421412635 0.0667982634062 162% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.169983403311 0.151304729494 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.126852387367 0.056905535591 223% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.97 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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