People should follow the customs and traditions when people start to live in a new country. To what extend do you agree or disagree?
Upon commencing a new life in a new foreign country, people often face a dilemma of whether they should stick to their cultural values or adhere to the local lifestyle. Although living up to the standards is legitimate on a certain level, I still believe that adaption to the host country’s traditional practices is sorely essential to immigrants.
On the one hand, it is difficult for new residents if they do not follow customs and traditions of native country. Expatriates who are unwilling to adhere to the new cultural ideas and behaviors might have to the face the hostility from the locals and suffer from the sense of isolation from society. Obviously if a person leads a bizarre lifestyle, he is not able to get on well with his neighbors. Furthermore, it is impossible for a business to break into a new market if they do not conform to the norms of social behaviors in the host country. There are bound to be many pitfalls, not only legal ones, but also winning and keeping customers. For instance, you are certainly boycotted if you open a restaurant serving pork in a Muslim country like Malaysia, Morocco…
On the other hand, there are numerous benefits for foreigners who integrate to local beliefs and behaviors. Firstly, it is easier to accommodate to a new surrounding if newcomers could adapt to native environment. Local residents seem to be more easygoing and helpful with people who respect for their cultural values. Secondly, foreigners can build up a strong relationships with the local when they take part in traditional events of host country. This friendship may be useful when we are in need. For example, when a Korean need to make a claim with the police about the crime occurred with him in Hanoi, a Vietnamese friend will be the most suitable supporter.
In conclusion, it seems to me that the immigrants should learn to adapt themselves to live in harmony in the exotic country by complying with its traditional conventions.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, may, second, secondly, so, still, well, for example, for instance, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 41.998997996 131% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1649.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 335.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.9223880597 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27820116611 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87262216796 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.567164179104 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 516.6 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.4083433628 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.785714286 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.9285714286 20.7667163134 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.2142857143 7.06120827912 145% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.22101679903 0.244688304435 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0706101054776 0.084324248473 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0642691871945 0.0667982634062 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128815110002 0.151304729494 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0358577071229 0.056905535591 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.97 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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