In some countries, some high school leavers are choosing to work or travel for a period of time before going to university. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of those school leavers’s decision. Give your opinion.
after graduating from high school, some people decide to get a job or go on a trip. although there are both drawbacks and merits for this kind of decision, I would argue that young people should take a gap year before pursuing higher education.
On the one hand, there are some disadvantages when a young person rush into a job or travel straight after school. Firstly, travelling costs youngsters a great deal. Most of young people are depend on their parents and do not have much money to pay for a visit, they might have to borrow it from their family or relative. this may be a pressure on those one who do not have any income. Secondly, they might be start their professional career later than their fellows. As a result, they might progress more slowly than those one at the same age.
On the other hand, it seems to me that taking a gap year is much more better than going to university immediately. The first reason is that it can bring about a good chance to acquire lots of real experience and skills for their chosen profession. For instance, if someone travel to England, he will able to speak, listen english language constantly then his english skills can be improve rapidly. Furthermore, getting a job can help youngsters to clarify their future careers. they can do various job without a long-term commitment and discover what may be right for them
In conclusion, I believe that there are many significant advantages for high school leavers who take a period of time to travelling or working prior to higher education, although this decision has some disadvantages.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, furthermore, if, may, second, secondly, so, then, for instance, in conclusion, kind of, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1319.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 277.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.76173285199 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07962216107 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58970861844 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.599277978339 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 400.5 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 69.4278391718 49.4020404114 141% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.461538462 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3076923077 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.3076923077 7.06120827912 146% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.211415756796 0.244688304435 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0667195234504 0.084324248473 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0778109359919 0.0667982634062 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.156437651504 0.151304729494 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.10621203385 0.056905535591 187% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 50.2224549098 134% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.33 12.4159519038 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.59 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 78.4519038076 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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