Some people say free time activities for children should be organized (by parents). Others say that children should be free to choose what they do in their free time. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Time flies, dragging exponential change in human awareness as to how free play is crucial to children. It, even though, is critical to support the idea that once young kids play or study, there should be parental control in order to shield them from any unexpected accidents. I, as a far-left supporter, lean on the opposite viewpoint now that creativity and independence are two elements making free play without parental constrain suitably.
On the one hand, the risk of crime and traffic are no longer concerns if there is parents’ company with kids during playing time. The drastic modifications in society spark a myriad of heinous crimes, which more or less wields strong influence over children’s safety. By far the most dangerous crimes are human trafficking or kidnapping causing some severe harm to minors’ psychology, which can be partially avoided if children are under parents’ observation all the time. Furthermore, the escalation of traffic accidents has alarmed fathers and mothers in taking good care of their children. A woeful fact is that the cases of the injured juvenile due to traffic accidents leap drastically these days, which surely can scare parents. Without spending time to supervise their kids, adverse repercussions are unavoidable.
On the other hand, I express my firm support that free play is helping children one step towards the capacity of creativity and strengthening their independence. When it comes to creativity, research carried out by professors in distinct prestigious universities states that by creating an enchanted kingdom with breathing dragons or heroes, children are able to boost their creativity, which facilitates them in school life. However, this benefit will be confined if there is parents’ appearance. Moreover, by deciding which games to play, the young enable to consolidate their independence. Needless to say, that independence is a lifelong skill that most people long to master in order to reach the zenith of success in later life. Therefore, instead of making kids belong to parents in any making-decision, giving them chances to show their own choices can be a wise method to train their independence.
In conclusion, parental controls in free play may exert even some advantageous and negative impacts; however, freeing kids in expressing their preferences can do more good than harm.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, however, if, may, moreover, so, then, therefore, as to, even so, in conclusion, more or less, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 41.998997996 129% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1996.0 1615.20841683 124% => OK
No of words: 374.0 315.596192385 119% => OK
Chars per words: 5.33689839572 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3976220399 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94762540439 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 226.0 176.041082164 128% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.604278074866 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 605.7 506.74238477 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.0963108959 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.75 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.375 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.75 7.06120827912 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.284964767723 0.244688304435 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0837693793398 0.084324248473 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0486514111332 0.0667982634062 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.168506010566 0.151304729494 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0160578150646 0.056905535591 28% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.99 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.51 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 112.0 78.4519038076 143% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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