Young people today spend too much money and time following fashion trends (clothing, tech) .To what extent do you agree or disagree?
The story of how the young go so far as to devote both time and money to fashion items has been no longer new since time immemorial. Notwithstanding receiving heinous diatribe from senior citizens, I woefully admit that there seems to be nothing changed much with the young’s shopping patterns.
To begin with, the desire to draw others’ attention makes the minor waste their time and fortune to purchase unnecessary high-cost products. It is noticeable to catch a multitude of young boys and girls putting on their bodies clothes and accessories with the price of millions or even billions on the streets. They consider expensive brand-name products can assist them to hold the spot of the crowd. There has been emerging an exclusive interview carried out on the streets, the question which is the same for all of the interviewers who are in the age range of 14 to 25 is about their outfit cost. The answers received could shock the public now that they have to pay over 2000 dollars for just a shirt while a normal cost is just a dollar. However, the more expensive the items are, the more attention its owner can get. Therefore, young people think that high-cost merchandise is worth the value.
Another reason which can be employed to explain why the youth long to search for the costliest items is due to imitation. It is undeniable that celebrities exert a strong influence on most of the young generation from fashion styles to discarding used-good habits. Due to the favor on their idols, they will try to obtain the same thing possessed by famous ones even though it costs them an arm and a leg. That is the reason why popular brand-name companies such as Gucci or Dolce & Gabanna have invited well-known people to become brand ambassadors owing to their certainty in the soaring sales. Under the eyes of adoring fans, sparkling things worn on celebrities’ bodies are good enough to be acquired since the young can be on-trend and get close in mental distance to their admired people.
In conclusion, instead of purchasing necessary items, teenagers and young adults are wasting their resources on expensive things.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, so, therefore, well, while, as to, in conclusion, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1770.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 363.0 315.596192385 115% => OK
Chars per words: 4.87603305785 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3649236973 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60567038862 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 222.0 176.041082164 126% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.611570247934 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 531.9 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.8221569395 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.0 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.2 20.7667163134 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.4 7.06120827912 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.110307819439 0.244688304435 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0363144056866 0.084324248473 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0403596467837 0.0667982634062 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0710832822497 0.151304729494 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0440661756485 0.056905535591 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.32 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.74 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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