Some people say government should give the health care the first priorities, some others believe there are more important priorities to spend the tax payers' money. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
The issue of whether the government ought to focus on the healthcare industry or spend the tax on other pressing problems has triggered intense debate. In my opinion, it seems to me that there are a variety of problems that need to be considered as the primary priorities instead of healthcare.
On the one hand, there are several reasons why prioritizing healthcare services is necessary. To begin with, given that the government chose to invest more in the healthcare industry, the citizens might reap some associated benefits, such as an increase in life expectancy. On top of that, the poor can have access to a number of standard healthcare services, which, in the past, they were not able to afford. Furthermore, the healthy population plays a prominent role in a wealthy nation due to better efficiency and high productivity output in the workforce. Therefore, it can be argued that investment in the healthcare industry has a beneficial impact on society.
On the other hand, it is perhaps even more crucial to take other subjects into account, the education system in particular. When it comes to education, it is truly essential to pay proper regard to the young generations. In the ever-changing world of technology, there is an ever-increasing demand for new pieces of equipment in schools, which assist students to keep on track of the latest job requirements. To take the computer as an example, computer literacy is, in all probability, an indispensable requirement that almost every recruiter seeks in a résumé; thus, equipping students with a good grasp of computer skills is a must. All in all, it can be concluded that education should be the first priority to the national budget.
In conclusion, there are convincing arguments both for and against whether the government should consider the healthcare industry as the major concern, it is my personal belief that investing in education is more significant.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, if, so, therefore, thus, in conclusion, in particular, such as, in my opinion, to begin with, on the other hand, on top of that
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1624.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 317.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.12302839117 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21953715646 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0500702744 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.574132492114 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 509.4 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.76152304609 210% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.2829792191 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.923076923 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.3846153846 20.7667163134 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.3076923077 7.06120827912 160% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.115008894049 0.244688304435 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0370182091079 0.084324248473 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0413803564051 0.0667982634062 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0730137221948 0.151304729494 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0269949199637 0.056905535591 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.21 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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