The chart below gives information about Someland's main exports in 2005, 2015, and future projections for 2025.

Essay topics:

The chart below gives information about Someland's main exports in 2005, 2015, and future projections for 2025.

The bar graph provides an overview of Someland’s major exports with respect to three different industries between 2005 and 2025.

It is clear that the revenue gained from meat and dairy products is predicted to fall off in the year 2025. By contrast, international tourism will become the primary source of Someland’s exports revenue in the future.

Looking at the information in more details, with a 1 billion USD decline, meat products is estimated to see the largest decrease in its revenue over the period shown, totaling 3 billion USD as of 2025. By far the most dramatic increase in relative terms on exports’ revenue was of the dairy industry, the number of which rose from 5 billion USD in 2005 to roughly 8 billion USD in 2015 and then will decline slightly at end-period. However, unlike meat products, this end-period revenue will be the result of both increase and decrease. Meanwhile, international tourism is estimated to worth approximately 8 billion USD – an increase of about 2 billion USD from 2005 and the highest total among the three industries at the end of the surveyed period.

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Average: 7.8 (1 vote)

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, look, so, then, while, with respect to

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 1.00243902439 299% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 33.7804878049 107% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 939.0 965.302439024 97% => OK
No of words: 187.0 196.424390244 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.02139037433 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69794460899 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92491371657 2.65546596893 110% => OK
Unique words: 107.0 106.607317073 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.572192513369 0.547539520022 105% => OK
syllable_count: 274.5 283.868780488 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 22.4926829268 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.911620342 43.030603864 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.142857143 112.824112599 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.7142857143 22.9334400587 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.28571428571 5.23603664747 139% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.122449589296 0.215688989381 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0631371792995 0.103423049105 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0412156127307 0.0843802449381 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10040325987 0.15604864568 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0316442923935 0.0819641961636 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 13.2329268293 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 61.2550243902 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.3012195122 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 11.4140731707 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.81 8.06136585366 109% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 40.7170731707 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.9970731707 113% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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