Some people say History is one of the most important school subjects. Other people think that, in today's world, subjects like Science and Technology are more important than History
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Some people think History is a vital subject in school. Other people ensivage the most necessary subjects needed to learn are Science and Technology in the modern world. History brings to us many past events of our ancestors back to the present and knows how it will shape our future. In my opinion, nowadays, science and technology are increasingly applying all aspects of our lives. Therefore, these subjects should have a strong concentration in school.
On the one hand, studying History provides a huge knowledge for students of the world we live in, and how countries, governments, economics, international relations were established and is operating these days. In addition, the awareness of the culture of all countries is known from which they came, and peace is remaining for a long time throughout all the countries due to taking account of the previous mistake that was made in the past.
On the other hand, in modern life, technology devices are using more widely from the younger to the older. Moreover, advanced technology equipment is applying in many fields such as Education, Business, Agriculture, even the military. This is showing that people will more concerned about what benefits newborn technology would bring to the earth, and each technology would change the world through the centuries. Therefore, I would argue that science and Technology subjects should be paid more attention which would help our life more convenient and improve our quality of life.
All things considered, while History help to know the past and appreciate the present world we live, it seems to me that Science and Technology are the subjects being on the top concern today.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, moreover, so, therefore, while, in addition, such as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1411.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 274.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.1496350365 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0685311056 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69761360945 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.565693430657 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 431.1 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.4626037525 49.4020404114 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.583333333 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8333333333 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.5 7.06120827912 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.304830063257 0.244688304435 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.12593910659 0.084324248473 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.109990710389 0.0667982634062 165% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.178119968699 0.151304729494 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.103662010077 0.056905535591 182% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.89 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.3 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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