Some people believe that nowadays we have too many choices. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Through many centuries, the families of music styles and genres have been developed, which people have more choices to select their favourite kinds of music for relaxing. It is often said that people have loads of music category for experiencing in modern times, and their lives are significantly more vivid and worth living. In my views, aside from advantages of many music choices, it can have some drawbacks.
On the one hand, a range choice of music type has some benefits. The first reason is that some people contended listening to a variety of music helps them gain diversity in music horizons. The mixture of some types of music with which people get along allows them to define themselves. For instance, a person interested in rock, rap, hip-hop music usually has an energetic personality. However, sometimes they may choose comforting chords such as relaxing instrumental music, ballad songs also expressing their other aspects. Besides, as music has intrinsically link to our cultures, it will bring people all around the world to come together. If someone has little in common with the other while making friends, they can choose a list of music types or singers to carry on a conversation.
On the other hand, a bunch of musical choices also have some drawbacks. Firstly, the excessive choice of music could cause people to be a hassle. Therefore, focusing on some particular types are preferable, but others could be neglected. With the evolution of modern music such as electronic dance music (EDM), popular music, the traditional music like jazz, opera, and some kinds of folk music were abandoned in the age of innovation. For example, nowadays, Vietnamese adolescents have a high frequency of enjoying K-pop songs rather than other kinds of music and when asking them about Vietnamese folk music, they will show little knowledge of this. Secondly, due to the reduction of traditional music taste, music entertainment companies have particularly strong attention where music genres are favourable. It is comprehensible that performers who used to be active in folk music decide to change their musical active orientation. Gradually, there will be little artists who choose to dedicate their lives to the music, so that it can cause some kinds of music are being out of date.
In conclusion, we should continue developing music genres because of its symbol for one particular culture. However, while supporting and enjoying modern music, we should also remain others especially traditional music of a country.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 422, Rule ID: AFFORD_VBG[1]
Message: This verb is used with infinitive: 'to comfort'.
Suggestion: to comfort
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Line 3, column 563, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'linked'.
Suggestion: linked
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, firstly, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, in my view, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 41.998997996 133% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2121.0 1615.20841683 131% => OK
No of words: 410.0 315.596192385 130% => OK
Chars per words: 5.17317073171 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.49982852243 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72115667222 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 214.0 176.041082164 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.521951219512 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 683.1 506.74238477 135% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 8.0 2.52805611222 316% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.1814322791 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.05 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.7 7.06120827912 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.114331433878 0.244688304435 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0546489500988 0.084324248473 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0422376679358 0.0667982634062 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0881288217917 0.151304729494 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0398662008931 0.056905535591 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.29 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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