the plans below show the layout of a university's sports center now, and how it will look after redevelopment.
The diagram depicts the structure of a university’s sports center at the present, and its transformation after reconstruction.
Looking from an overall perspective, there are significant changes which provide more amenties with sport facilities toward the West and the East of the Sport Centre. At the main entrance, there will be add more changing room, and entertainment spots like shopping and café.
At the present, there are two outdoor courts on either side of the university sport building. The plan is to convert the westen outdoor courts into leisure pool larger in size than the current 25m pool at the center. To the east outdoor courts are going to replace with sport hall next to seating area, erect two adjacent dance studios at the northeast. The facilites in the main building will not undergo alterations including changing room, reception, pool, and seating. The only slight difference is that the northenmost gym above swimming pool will be double in size eastewards.
Right on the entrance, two changing rooms will be constructed on the end of two side of the south of building and the adjoining sports shop to the west. Across from sports shop, there will be a café for relaxing.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...e, there will be add more changing room, and entertainment spots like shopping an...
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Suggestion: larger
...westen outdoor courts into leisure pool larger in size than the current 25m pool at the center...
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Suggestion: double
...henmost gym above swimming pool will be double in size eastewards. Right on the entrance, tw...
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...end of two side of the south of building and the adjoining sports shop to the wes...
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...hop, there will be a café for relaxing.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, so, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 1.00243902439 499% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 33.7804878049 92% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1010.0 965.302439024 105% => OK
No of words: 200.0 196.424390244 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.05 4.92477711251 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76060309309 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74224360698 2.65546596893 103% => OK
Unique words: 114.0 106.607317073 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.57 0.547539520022 104% => OK
syllable_count: 289.8 283.868780488 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.482926829268 621% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.4612016612 43.030603864 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.0 112.824112599 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 22.9334400587 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.8 5.23603664747 34% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 1.69756097561 295% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.186059583914 0.215688989381 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0790420818069 0.103423049105 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.045789238782 0.0843802449381 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.1258897376 0.15604864568 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0386547350491 0.0819641961636 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.2329268293 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 61.2550243902 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.3012195122 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.01 11.4140731707 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.26 8.06136585366 102% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 40.7170731707 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.4329268293 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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