Some people say that it is good to have a uniform for all the employees at work. Do you agree or not ?

Essay topics:

Some people say that it is good to have a uniform for all the employees at work. Do you agree or not ?

Their is an opinion that all working stuff have to wear the same coordinated outfit. In my opinion, I completely agree with this statement because advantages of this tendency outweighs disadvantages.
First of all, it has many pros from the side of safety. There are many production companies, which works with chemical and radioactive substances. So that during the work people can damage their own clothing and even get injured. For example, while working in labatabarotium wearing a special uniform is required.
Secondly, it could help to build a sense of teamwork and strong boundary between employees. I mean, that everyone would work together in the same clothing which leads to more productivity, due to not being distracted. Moreover, they would not be any discrimination between people. For example, someone could feel oneself like fish out of the water. Consequently, efficiency of work would decrease.
Furthermore, a uniform serves as a advertisement. It would be easier to find out needed company between million of others if workers wore clothing with the name of company. Advantage for workers is that more and more people would know about them, therefore sale rates would increase.
To conclude with, I think that a uniform is an integral part of each company, despite spheres of activity. Even though it has disadvantages too, wearing uniform worth it. To point out that in such case people would not spend hours thinking about what to wear and even can economy on that.

Votes
Average: 5.6 (1 vote)

Comments

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, furthermore, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, while, for example, i mean, i think, first of all, in my opinion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1253.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 244.0 315.596192385 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13524590164 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.95227774224 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82349090909 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.631147540984 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 386.1 506.74238477 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 25.2585248893 49.4020404114 51% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 73.7058823529 106.682146367 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.3529411765 20.7667163134 69% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.52941176471 7.06120827912 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.17178381644 0.244688304435 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0547216961339 0.084324248473 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0415597736325 0.0667982634062 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0935810056928 0.151304729494 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0425981812027 0.056905535591 75% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 13.0946893788 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 50.2224549098 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 11.3001002004 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.94 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.15 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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