Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are some more important environmental problems.
Discuss both these views and give your opinion.
Currently, lack of certain species of natural habitat has recognized as the fundamental environmental issue by a group of people, on the contrary, others harshly critique the former opinion, as they agree that, undoubtedly more imperative difficulties are actively involved to pose an environmental hazard. From my perspective, I side with the latter view since there are a host of vital reasons behind this. To obviously consider the leading one, I would say the unfavorable air quality, which is the most troublesome problem for the upset ecosystem at the present time.
First, let me put a light on the current issue of losing some rare life forms which makes some people concerned about it. I am undeniably sure most people would agree that our current way of life is putting an unprecedented strain on the Earth's ecosystem.undoubtedly when a great number of people have accepted logging ,as an obvious example of damaging the forests, some dire happenings such as vanishing the forests along with destroying a substantial number of both natural and aquatic habitats would be a direct besides undesirable result of these actions which are usually taken by individual beings all over the green areas.Furthermore,as it is evident from the information provided by several environmentalists lack of some species can admittedly have deleterious impacts on our environment namely ,ecological balance can be upset, hence this can cause the total ecosystem a considerable disorder in number of existing living things.
Despite all difficulties have been faced by environment as a consequence of shortage of a number of living forms,others has been arguing of other factors that hassled ecosystem in a more hazardous ways. I would strongly support this view point relying on a number of valid reasons. The first point to mention would be an air pollution. Take for example some cities such as Beijing, Dalian, that are located in great china, are now heavily polluted and permanently covered by a cloud of pollution that can highly put our environment at risk. The second and equally importantly would be the increasing amount of carbon foot print as well as food miles, which are being produced by people, can have serious detrimental effects as well. The third and enough urgent is, in our world there are a vast number of industries, which they are not Eco-friendly as a result of they are burning fossil fuels therefore, emitting carbon dioxide, and spreading pollutants in the air that can cause more significant problems such as forming acid rain along with melting the polar ice cap.
By way of conclusion, whereas the extinction of some irreplaceable species can easily put our environment at high risk, there are some others urgent inevitable issues such as pollutant airborne that should be given more importance.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, first, furthermore, hence, if, second, so, therefore, third, well, whereas, as for, for example, such as, as a result, as well as, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 13.1623246493 167% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 41.998997996 136% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2372.0 1615.20841683 147% => OK
No of words: 458.0 315.596192385 145% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.17903930131 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.62611441266 4.20363070211 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02533116673 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 257.0 176.041082164 146% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.561135371179 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 756.0 506.74238477 149% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 38.0 20.2975951904 187% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 195.661467137 49.4020404114 396% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 197.666666667 106.682146367 185% => OK
Words per sentence: 38.1666666667 20.7667163134 184% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.9166666667 7.06120827912 183% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 18.0 5.01903807615 359% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.199243195757 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0661994364022 0.084324248473 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0461871630594 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129771160438 0.151304729494 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0370584294485 0.056905535591 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 22.1 13.0946893788 169% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 24.45 50.2224549098 49% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 19.3 11.3001002004 171% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.36 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.21 8.58950901804 119% => OK
difficult_words: 136.0 78.4519038076 173% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 17.2 10.1190380762 170% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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