It is true that the problem related to environment is still the most debatable among scientists, and national leaders around the globe. While many people think the main problems are the disappearance and extinction of certain plants and animals. I would argue that there are other important matter that can cause problem to the environment.
Natural gas such as Oxygen will be reduced if plants does not exists. Oxygen is an natural gas, every species on planet Earth rely on this natural chemical to survive, Oxygen can only produce by plants, and they have been doing it for a long time, in order to have an abundance of Oxygen to turn Earth into a plannet that we could live in. In addition, animals such as birds are pivital for human crops. Insects can be dangerous for human crops, caterpillar, and moth has been destroying crops, and leave them in the state unsalvageable. For instance, apple trees have been destroyed by caterpillar worms and leave the fruit on the tree to be rotten.
On the other hand, there is another important environmental problems that we should not ignore. Ozone layers are being destroyed by human action. Many factories are being built to meet the demand of clients and customers, these factories had released fumes onto the air slowly destroying the Ozone layers that are protecting us from the radiation of the sun, and other toxic cosmic radiations. Such as the incident in the 1970, nation around the globe had data about Ozone layers slowly decreasing, these nation have join together and put out regulation for factories, and the Ozone layers now are stable but these layers are not going to be back to the original state.
In conclusion, the disappearance of plants and animals can be devastating towards the environment but there is another problem that could cause harm to the environment that we should not ignore.
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 63, Rule ID: DOES_X_HAS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'exist'? As 'do' is already inflected, the verb cannot also be inflected.
Suggestion: exist
...ygen will be reduced if plants does not exists. Oxygen is an natural gas, every specie...
^^^^^^
Line 2, column 63, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[3]
Message: The verb 'does' requires base form of the verb: 'exist'
Suggestion: exist
...ygen will be reduced if plants does not exists. Oxygen is an natural gas, every specie...
^^^^^^
Line 2, column 80, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...ed if plants does not exists. Oxygen is an natural gas, every species on planet Ea...
^^
Line 2, column 126, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[8]
Message: The proper name in singular (Earth) must be used with a third-person verb: 'relies'.
Suggestion: relies
...ural gas, every species on planet Earth rely on this natural chemical to survive, Ox...
^^^^
Line 3, column 499, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this nation' or 'these nations'?
Suggestion: this nation; these nations
...a about Ozone layers slowly decreasing, these nation have join together and put out regulati...
^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 517, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'joined'.
Suggestion: joined
...rs slowly decreasing, these nation have join together and put out regulation for fac...
^^^^
Line 4, column 15, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...k to the original state. In conclusion, the disappearance of plants and animals ...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, still, while, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 13.1623246493 175% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1549.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 316.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.90189873418 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21620550194 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57063917879 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.528481012658 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 478.8 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 0.809619238477 741% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 75.7033294039 49.4020404114 153% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.153846154 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.3076923077 20.7667163134 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.92307692308 7.06120827912 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.14873961225 0.244688304435 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0670148773869 0.084324248473 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0752377606648 0.0667982634062 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107020315253 0.151304729494 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0731433883716 0.056905535591 129% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.44 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.92 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 63, Rule ID: DOES_X_HAS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'exist'? As 'do' is already inflected, the verb cannot also be inflected.
Suggestion: exist
...ygen will be reduced if plants does not exists. Oxygen is an natural gas, every specie...
^^^^^^
Line 2, column 63, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[3]
Message: The verb 'does' requires base form of the verb: 'exist'
Suggestion: exist
...ygen will be reduced if plants does not exists. Oxygen is an natural gas, every specie...
^^^^^^
Line 2, column 80, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...ed if plants does not exists. Oxygen is an natural gas, every species on planet Ea...
^^
Line 2, column 126, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[8]
Message: The proper name in singular (Earth) must be used with a third-person verb: 'relies'.
Suggestion: relies
...ural gas, every species on planet Earth rely on this natural chemical to survive, Ox...
^^^^
Line 3, column 499, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this nation' or 'these nations'?
Suggestion: this nation; these nations
...a about Ozone layers slowly decreasing, these nation have join together and put out regulati...
^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 517, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'joined'.
Suggestion: joined
...rs slowly decreasing, these nation have join together and put out regulation for fac...
^^^^
Line 4, column 15, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...k to the original state. In conclusion, the disappearance of plants and animals ...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, still, while, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 13.1623246493 175% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1549.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 316.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.90189873418 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21620550194 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57063917879 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.528481012658 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 478.8 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 0.809619238477 741% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 75.7033294039 49.4020404114 153% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.153846154 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.3076923077 20.7667163134 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.92307692308 7.06120827912 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.14873961225 0.244688304435 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0670148773869 0.084324248473 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0752377606648 0.0667982634062 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107020315253 0.151304729494 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0731433883716 0.056905535591 129% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.44 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.92 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.