People have different views about the main environmental issue. Some people argue that the main issue is loss of some species of plant and animals. While other individuals say that there are more serious problems.
Some species of animals and plants are definitely in fatality due to the research and hunting in preserved areas. There are lot of endangered plants and animals in Red Book. For example, Mazaalai is one of the rarest animals in the world that has only 40 of them left. Furthermore, people are trying hard to save those endangered animals. However in my opinion, it is still not the main environmental issue. There ate lots of other serious problems such as global warming, air pollution, and water scarcity.
Firstly, in my country, air pollution is the biggest environmental issue. Even though, we are still trying to decrease carbon dioxide emission. Also, there is a lot of countries which are in same situation around our planet.
Secondly, climate change is becoming more serious recently. They even say that ice mountains started to melt she to the fact that global warming is increasing dramatically in last few years. For instance, global warming making some extreme weather events even worse. Due to this, there are lots of catastrophic blazes happening around the world recently.
Lastly, water shortage became serious problem in early 2000, however it is still have not got any solution. It is bigger problem in tropical countries such as Africa. There oya lot of new disease appearing due to the fact that they are drinking dirty water because of water scarcity.
In conclusion, there are more serious problems around the world other than loss of particular species of plants and animals
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 149, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “While” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...s of some species of plant and animals. While other individuals say that there are mo...
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Line 3, column 340, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
... hard to save those endangered animals. However in my opinion, it is still not the main...
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Line 9, column 82, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'had'.
Suggestion: had
...blem in early 2000, however it is still have not got any solution. It is bigger prob...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, lastly, second, secondly, so, still, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 7.85571142285 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1444.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 284.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.08450704225 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55769567797 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.517605633803 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 450.9 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 22.3752094962 49.4020404114 45% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 72.2 106.682146367 68% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.2 20.7667163134 68% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.8 7.06120827912 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 3.9879759519 276% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.281153279497 0.244688304435 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0807243987179 0.084324248473 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0845812108708 0.0667982634062 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.158816576006 0.151304729494 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.140819048306 0.056905535591 247% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 13.0946893788 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 50.2224549098 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 11.3001002004 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.59 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.94 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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