Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals Others say that there are more important environmental problems Discuss both these views and give your own opinion
The earth has undergone several environmental changes and threads which can bring many detrimental effects. Yet, the prevailing of the society argue that the extinction of myriad plants’ and animals’ species is the major issue of our environment. However, the others oppose this stereotype and espouse that there are more issues of our environment; more harmful than the distinction. Thus, I will interpret aforementioned concept of the individuals in this essay.
To begin with, the lost of some varieties of flora and fauna is soaring steeply in this modern era. People are not concerned about this sparse problem. Furthermore, they keep doing some illegal actions, such as: wild logging and deliberate hunting. To illustrate, many companies often cut off the plantation of a forest, in order to open an area and create new buildings. As a result, variety of animals lost their habitat and there will be merely one option: starve to death. The prevailing of these animals can not feed on anything as usual, consequently, they will die and become extinct gradually.
On the other hand, the earthquake and flood are quite harmful in some areas. These threads have caused a lot of material lost and fatalities. We can not jus omit these occurrences because it is suprisingly agonizing for many people,especially the ones who live near the sea or river. Some journals have pointed that both earthquake and flood can be ad deadly as an epidemic, while it can wipe out the prevailing population of the earth.
To summarize, both extinction and another physiccal environmental damage can be quite fatal for all creature. From my point of view, I espouse a concept which interprets that all kind of issues are harmful, and I believe that we should go the extra mile to prevent these issues, or at least minimize the damage.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , especially
...is suprisingly agonizing for many people,especially the ones who live near the sea or river...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, furthermore, however, so, thus, while, at least, kind of, such as, as a result, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1528.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 303.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.04290429043 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17215713816 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84877178078 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.610561056106 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 479.7 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.2348567508 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.5 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9375 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.875 7.06120827912 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 3.9879759519 276% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.184406872576 0.244688304435 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0566361175517 0.084324248473 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0504901359392 0.0667982634062 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103215815209 0.151304729494 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0492953858119 0.056905535591 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.96 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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